Carnal Love

  

The taste for her angelic skin

Can be seen in every breath

That penetrates the darkness

Like the moonbeams

That brings him to life.

 

Not even the rain can drench

The desires from within

For it only brings out the longing

To quench his unbridled thirst

From the lust that seeps from her skin

And rises in the heat of carnal knowledge.

 

His cry is heard through the

Loneliness of midnight

She detects his call of the wild

Overall the other cries of passion

And she is ready to feel

The beast inside.

 

Those eyes, his piercing eyes

Locks onto her silhouette approaching

From the distance.

He takes a deep breath to smell

That distinct scent of her lust,

It is like jasmine with a hint of leather.

 

Her inhibitions are sacrificed

Forevermore to rest in peace

As he takes her in his wanting arms

To penetrate her last known fear

With his primal urges.

 

Now and forever more she will always be

His carnal love.

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

Sexy in a carnal way... no doubt. My favorite lines are here:
"Her inhibitions are sacrificed
Forevermore to rest in peace
As he takes her in is wanting arms
To penetrate her last known fear
With his primal urges."
Really paints a picture of eternal primal attraction. There were a couple of cheesy cliche remarks like "call of the wild" that I'd like you to have used your great descriptions instead- like what you did with her scent. That was sexy! Keep up the good work. I'm a fan.

[Wicahpi]

You capture the passion of carnal love very tellingly.
I enjoyed this read and it reminds me of someone...

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. truly passionate carnality flowing thoughout! A sense of bringing out the wild side of another and releasing their inhibitions .. in the call of the wild. The scent of another truly can trigger primal urges when all the physical attraction is there! Very creative and sexual in nature.. embracing all that is human within.. the ending implies such strong carnal love as to state eternity.. very high passion! Her willingness to sacfrice her inhibitions also implies this as well. Great Work and Thank you so much for sharing.. =)

[closed account]

whooo hoo,, very erotic,, and sensual
the beast is eager to quench her thirst
this was very sexy.. let it go..... sometimes
put the prude in you in the closet and
let the want in you escape... and take..
:-) I likey!! lol

[Angelic Darkness]

Oh, this is my fantasy man for sure LOL! I love this sexy, sensual call of the
wild. It reminds me of being out in a rain forest with no one else there
but your captor wo haunts you with with primal urges. That sounds like a
romance novel:). Thanks for sharing....AD

[octane143]

mmmm...another great one! Extremely descriptive and it flowed so well. I devoured it up the first reading and had to go back and re-read it. Very sensual and really grabs you...GREAT JOB!

[Valerie Dean Belew]

All I can say is this is too Hott. Good description of desire. Liked it. Hey, you never did tell me which story won the contest, thought Kelli says that wasn't what got you kicked off for a day. LOL. V

[Jason]

Pefect title...beautiful flow that sails with the winds of wild passion. I really liked this. I thought the picture you painted was/is beautiful and your use of metaphors put the dramatics into a brilliant work of art.

[Bud]

The passions of love reside in each and everyone of us. To let those passions manifest and run free is to live life. Again, another Outstanding poetic work of art, Dale! You have captured well, the passions and desire of love!

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

raw sexuality. i love the imagery & descriptions of this poem. you turned ravage, animalistic lust into something beautiful with your words. a gorgeous, deeply sensual write.

[Sorry Infamous]

This is sexy and inventive. So many creative emotions bubble over sensually...
Great, A fave.
"Those eyes, his piercing eyes"...sigh