Complete

 

Your sultry lips

Upon my exposed skin

Is like moonbeams

Lighting the passion

Of midnights sins.

 

Anything beyond

Where my fantasies could

Ever conceive.

 

Pressing your body

So gently against mine

Can only compare

To two clouds

Meeting in the sky…

 

Letting desire

Drench what Mother Nature

Never could.

 

Feeding our mind

With morsels of shared intellect

Fills the curiosity

Yet leaves us

Wanting to savor more.

 

Two chefs stimulating

Each other’s taste buds

With enough food for a lifetime.

 

Finding comfort from

The harsh weather of life

Under the strength

Of two soft hearts

Knowing they need one another.

 

Becoming two pillars

With enough strength

To carry the weight of the world.

 

It don’t take a genius to see

That together

We are complete.

 

 

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Dear lord, lol. This was so... *insert emotion* It's sweet yet heavy with sultriness in a subtle way. I love how you can describe two peole being together without getting vulgar. My favorite stanza:

"Finding comfort from
The harsh weather of life
Under the strength
Of two soft hearts
Knowing they need one another."

That was so goddamn touching, lol. Amazing job :)

[An Ordinary Woman]

Whoa- super sultry for a special lady who is thanking the stars above... Nice RRC

[J.Black]

Ah, Dale. How I've missed reading your masterpieces for oh so long! ...Simply beautiful.

[SM Davis]

Tssssss.....

Whew! Hot stuff there cowboy!

[54321]

Utterly Beautiful. Healthy relationship at its best. Love this!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh this is such a sensuous writing.. please keep in mind this review is being done on Canada Day.. I am a little tipsy.. but I will do my best!! (I don't drink alot...lol) .. anyways .. there is such a divine passionate feel to this.. the feel of unity.. needing the other as you do not have the strength to carry the weight of the world without the other.. the one stanza really stands out:

Letting desire
Drench what Mother Nature
Never could.

Wow.. blazing hot here... imagination is running wild (I'm drinking VEX which further intensifies the written..lol.. I am just joking here but not really) This is a really intense stanza.. to compare the drenching of passion to Mother Nature.. you just can not get much more intense! Two chefs stimulating each others taste buds.. that is another.. I really like food.. but I love great food!!! You have so many comparisons and metaphors at work here.. I am in AWE! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

[Angelic Darkness]

BRAVO! Love this...love this! This is incredibly beautiful. The words you use
to describe something else. The connection, the focus is strong.
These are the lines I love:

Your sultry lips
Upon my exposed skin
Is like moonbeams
Lighting the passion
Of midnights sins.
Pressing your body
So gently against mine
Feeding our mind
With morsels of shared intellect
Fills the curiosity
Yet leaves us
Wanting to savor more.

This is a love that stands side by side, equals in every
aspect. WONDERFUL!

AD
Can only compare
To two clouds
Meeting in the sky�

[ape domenigoni]

I like all the food and nature analogies...good job cowboy

[closed account]

Daaaaaaaaaang,,, Dale,, this was magnificent!! this was truly beautiful, so full of passion and control, so sure of what is being said word for word, eludes such confidence and certainty!! as if the writer is saying... *Yes I found her and we are IT*!!!!

THIS WAS AN AMAZING OUTSTANDING WONDERFUL AND INSPIRING WRITE OF LOVE AND CERTAINTY!!
GREAT JOB

[Anastasia Starlena]

My goodness this was beautifully written with emotion. Very erotic with a sweet romantic tone. Absolutely stunning. Two lovers completing each other and becoming one such a very beautiful expression.