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A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

Your sultry lips

Upon my exposed skin

Is like moonbeams

Lighting the passion

Of midnights sins.

 

Anything beyond

Where my fantasies could

Ever conceive.

 

Pressing your body

So gently against mine

Can only compare

To two clouds

Meeting in the sky…

 

Letting desire

Drench what Mother Nature

Never could.

 

Feeding our mind

With morsels of shared intellect

Fills the curiosity

Yet leaves us

Wanting to savor more.

 

Two chefs stimulating

Each other’s taste buds

With enough food for a lifetime.

 

Finding comfort from

The harsh weather of life

Under the strength

Of two soft hearts

Knowing they need one another.

 

Becoming two pillars

With enough strength

To carry the weight of the world.

 

It don’t take a genius to see

That together

We are complete.

 

 

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Dear lord, lol. This was so... *insert emotion* It's sweet yet heavy with sultriness in a subtle way. I love how you can describe two peole being together without getting vulgar. My favorite stanza:

"Finding comfort from
The harsh weather of life
Under the strength
Of two soft hearts
Knowing they need one another."

That was so goddamn touching, lol. Amazing job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Loved it! Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


ok, where is your publisher?
I know darn well you have a book of poems out there in Barnes and Nobel....now...if you don't then you should!
you really do rock! x0x0x

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved it! Pure romance and sweet love.......very nice!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this........pure emotion, a wonderful write ty:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem is very strong in metaphors. I like this very much.

--Kelsey

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

the end reminded me of a country song, and the rest was utterly captivating. really cool to read and experience! thank your for sharing this!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a poem of true desire... you put it so well... it shines.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love makes us happier, healthier, and better all around. You have shared a bit of the majesty and I'm glad to have had the chance to read. Nice job. Sharon

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Brilliant, Dale! Simply Brilliant! You are a Master, as I have said before. The imagery is Fantastic! The reference to cooking and taste buds is more than Brilliant...Genius!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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