When Love is Found

Trying some Shakespearian style

  

To truly love a soul one fully

Needs to let the passion burn

Like eternity has come and gone,

Appreciate every ounce of beauty

Flowing from thee truest one’s heart,

Memorize every line, curve, smile

So when separated by miles

They are never more then a blink away.

Let not false distractions

Of mundane duties nor flesh of strangers

Cast sins upon your heavenly devotion

Laying it to rest in the depths of hell.

For when the one

That brings out heaven within

Thy heart like a prayer answered

They should be worshiped not forsaken

Then life shall become a self purgatory.

 

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

Beautiful Sonnet! Bill couldn't have said it better himself! ~sigh~ Love it!:)







(ps. i meant william, but he preferes Bill)

[Eliza Pleasant]

That was a wonderful poem. Correction: a wonderful Shakespearian poem. I love it.

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Very Beautiful my friend. I agree with the comment
below. you do excell on the subject of love

Wonderful Wonderful Read

Hugs
D

[Babbette Francis]

Wow!... This is sooo beautiful. Your writing is phenomenal on the subject of love... makes ya go hmm, before shaking your and being left dumbfounded... Rebel, huh?? Hmmm??? ; )

This is gorgeous!
Another Fave!! lol

[MIA ST. PAUL]

this is truly beautiful Dale... made me cry... thanks for sharing it with us..

Mia :)

[Janice Ann]

What beautiful words lad! Wowzer! Finding someone like this poem states...is a wonderful thing and it really shows how beautiful a life can be! Thanks for sharing this one honey!

Janice Ann

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a wonderful piece it is, this was vey moving my favorite lines

for when the one

That brings out heaven within

Thy heart like a prayer answered

that was so gorgeous..

[Anastasia Starlena]

Exquisite piece. What a beautiful piece. Very breathtaking. Great job.

[An owl on the moon]

Beautifully flowing write that expresses such a depth to love. You display so well the all encompassing passion and devotion of love's heart and soul. Inspiring.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

What an interesting ending. Truly well expressed emotions and sentiments in this work. Thanks for sharing. It was a delight to read.
Light,
Siddartha