The Balance Of Nature

  

A soft off shore breeze

Refreshes the spirit

As soul searching waves

Crash against the rocks.

The balance of nature

Is in full effect

Bringing the good with the bad.

So even when the heart

Is sinking like a stone

The soul is free as a bird.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Brilliant metaphors in comparison to being human.. a real feeling and flow of self-discovery pours out as well in this inspirational write! As we truly can compare those waves to so many elements that plague us and crash at the great barriers of our souls... bringing the good with the bad.. embracing everything in everyday life.. so much can be found in this writing that may be short but full of meaning! Thank you so much for sharing... divine and profound! =)

[An Ordinary Woman]

A nice twist cowboy. The balance of nature in full effect is a beautiful thing sometimes. Great job!

[Georgia Gypsy]

Lovely I have felt this on many occasions!

[Ladysue]

I agree with Craig, the contrasts in nature and in our own lives is very well done in here. Amazing piece of writing....

[Fran Marie]

Extremely lovely in eveyway,inspiring in all its beauty

and quite uplifting to the soul~Superb Pen as always

[closed account]

very uplifting full of hope
I love these style of poems
gives that good fuzzy wholesome
feeling inside!! :-)

[An owl on the moon]

This so perfectly displays the contrasts in nature as well as in our own lives. The tender and the torrid, beauty and tragedy, all working within us and around us. Amazing write!

[Babbette Francis]

Wowwww..... I love this. It's beautiful.

[Anastasia Starlena]

This is an absolutely perfect piece. So hard is it to be balanced at times and I have never though about this perspective before. This is truly an amazing.

"So even when the heart
Is sinking like a stone
The soul is free as a bird."

Brilliant thought....