Red Rose Kisses

  

I breathe in when I know you’re near

To capture the scent of new life you bring,

Like the smell of fresh fallen rain.

 

I breathe out when you’re not around

For the element of life seems to be missing

As if my heart were floating in space.

 

I would wonder these harsh plains forever

For just one feel of your red rose kisses

So I can experience paradise just once.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Intoxicating lovelust.. the flow of emotions and senses truly leaves a sense of a very high level of attraction. The comparison of one's red rose kisses and experiencing a paradise just once.. and the willingness to wander harsh plains forever to reach it.. truly striking. An inspiration to read .. with very sensuous feelings. This is deep.. lusting at the mere presence of another.. and then the heart feeling empty at their absence. Can be the feelings of a truly captivating romance.. trapped and spellbound.. such a whirlwind of emotions. Passion bleeds through this writing.. so many can relate to such real raw emotions.. with many being left numb in realistic rejection or fear of pursuit. Your ending implies you have never known such paradise.. leaving me sad .. as everyone is worthy of finding such a place in the world with loving arms to embrace them. I sincerely hope you find your true life's soulmate.. and daily inspiraton. Thank you so much for sharing.. this one is sure to touch so many hearts..=)

[Anastasia Starlena]

A truly beautiful piece. Exquisite in it's beauty. The passion and heartfelt emotion is just captivating.

[closed account]

very romantic,, the sensual side of you is always captivating
it seems so soft and sultry.. You have a very nice image of
loves sweetest sin.. or sweetest moment..
how you can go from a pop star to a moment of love
is very admirable,, shows off your true talent
as a writer..

[MIA ST. PAUL]

This is truly beautiful..I loved it...great work as usually

Mia..

:)

[Lizanne]

You really deserve to be poet lauriet of the year.

[An owl on the moon]

You vividly convey the depth of passion through the very act of breathing in your lover's scent, feeling her life, knowing her presence. So beautifully done!

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

Who is the lucky lady she must be a real catch.your words are so inspirational and would charm any sweet maiden.

[Babbette Francis]

wow... this is beautiful. Breathtaking actually. You know how to cause a stir with the butterflies in my tummy ; )

Kisses~

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, how lovely!!....red rose kisses sound so very delightful!...but the pink rose you put on my page is absolutely the most beautiful pink rose I have ever seen!! THANK YOU!
And, I really like your expressions of love in this write!!