Red Rose Kisses

  

I breathe in when I know you’re near

To capture the scent of new life you bring,

Like the smell of fresh fallen rain.

 

I breathe out when you’re not around

For the element of life seems to be missing

As if my heart were floating in space.

 

I would wonder these harsh plains forever

For just one feel of your red rose kisses

So I can experience paradise just once.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Intoxicating lovelust.. the flow of emotions and senses truly leaves a sense of a very high level of attraction. The comparison of one's red rose kisses and experiencing a paradise just once.. and the willingness to wander harsh plains forever to reach it.. truly striking. An inspiration to read .. with very sensuous feelings. This is deep.. lusting at the mere presence of another.. and then the heart feeling empty at their absence. Can be the feelings of a truly captivating romance.. trapped and spellbound.. such a whirlwind of emotions. Passion bleeds through this writing.. so many can relate to such real raw emotions.. with many being left numb in realistic rejection or fear of pursuit. Your ending implies you have never known such paradise.. leaving me sad .. as everyone is worthy of finding such a place in the world with loving arms to embrace them. I sincerely hope you find your true life's soulmate.. and daily inspiraton. Thank you so much for sharing.. this one is sure to touch so many hearts..=)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Soft, gentle, lovely ...

Jazz x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jazzy... you know that is how I could describe your heart as well.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Awwww .. hugs .. xx

[Ayvid N]

The first two verses ring so true. We thrive in the presence of the beloved and equally...pine for them in their absence. The third verse is all about the yearning...
It's very romantic!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweets... the romantic in me speaking loud and proud.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Just one more night with you........a beautiful piece of longing.

[Phibby Venable]

love the breathy gentle feel & images.

[Kerry O'Connor]

I really like the juxtaposition of breathing out and in, and the presence or absence of the object of your affection. Very charming poem.

[.]

how did I miss this exquisite poem.. you take my breath away :)

[?]

Sighhhhhhh,
This is so beautiful, sensual
wow, to be able to love and be loved like this is and would be so so so so wonderful. This has painted a moving picture in my head. Romantic
Love the ending

[Liza]

I'll never breathe the same if I keep this write pasted into my 3rd eye....every inhalation is sipped slowly and exhalation is a relief of the pressure....

[Ladysue]

Great title...that feeling is so beautiful to have...I like the soft tone of this piece..so tender and sensuous...

For just one feel of your red rose kisses
So I can experience paradise just once.

Gorgeous writing...

[Jenny Nelson]

What a lovely, longing piece. So sweet and inviting. Just beautiful.