All Over My Heart

The power of love... I believe

  

Sun glistened lips

Leave a pink impression

Upon this soul of mine

That is reflected

In the glow of my smile.

 

Sweet dreamy eyes

Lifts my spirit to the clouds

Putting the moon in reach

And it shines

Through the color of my eyes.

 

Sensually dangerous curves

Is the road to my heaven

Whenever I touch your satin skin,

It is highlighted

By the roses in my cheeks.

 

My love for you

Is written all over my face.

Though not carved in stone

It is firmly tattooed

All over my heart.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. sounds like a bit of lovelust creeping in.. touching your soul.. sweet passion that lifts you and this can clearly be seen in the eyes and face of a person taken! It is usually the beginning moments of love that we feel this way.. the butterflies.. the fantasies and possibilities that flow through us.. and others do see! They can not see your heart tatooed.. however you sure can feel it! Love the wording to this as it is a modern writing of love.. that everyone can understand.. this freestyle flow is raw and very passionate.. thank you so much for sharing! =)

[Anita B Jacques]

Oh, soooo nice and romantic, lifting my spirit up. I love every words, purrrfect. Thank you for sharing. God Bless

[Sheila Kline]

Sun, moon and stars all make for a delightful celestial feast of love, and then tattooes it in your heart!
Visually beautiful and sweet!!

[Lauren Beth]

Very lovely piece..I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Although I did like the whole thing :) Very sweet.

[Wildfleour]

Sweet, Dale. I love the last stanza, in particular.

[Wildfleour]

I'm liking this Justin.

[closed account]

awwe how beautiful,, I love the ending
so sweet, is this an older piece???
either way poem well done...