All Over My Heart

The power of love... I believe

  

Sun glistened lips

Leave a pink impression

Upon this soul of mine

That is reflected

In the glow of my smile.

 

Sweet dreamy eyes

Lifts my spirit to the clouds

Putting the moon in reach

And it shines

Through the color of my eyes.

 

Sensually dangerous curves

Is the road to my heaven

Whenever I touch your satin skin,

It is highlighted

By the roses in my cheeks.

 

My love for you

Is written all over my face.

Though not carved in stone

It is firmly tattooed

All over my heart.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. sounds like a bit of lovelust creeping in.. touching your soul.. sweet passion that lifts you and this can clearly be seen in the eyes and face of a person taken! It is usually the beginning moments of love that we feel this way.. the butterflies.. the fantasies and possibilities that flow through us.. and others do see! They can not see your heart tatooed.. however you sure can feel it! Love the wording to this as it is a modern writing of love.. that everyone can understand.. this freestyle flow is raw and very passionate.. thank you so much for sharing! =)

[Bud]

Ah! Love and the wonders that come with it. Another Fine and Beautiful piece of romantic art from a Master! I agree that is the power of love! Excellent, my friend. Most Excellent!

[Sorry Infamous]

The most powerful part of this was the ending. So commanding in a way...

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a powerful expression of love and devotion, so eloquently spoken. You perfectly express the depth of a true and rich love that marks one forever. Beautifully done!

[Babbette Francis]

Wow... this is beautiful!

My love for you
Is written all over my face.
Though not carved in stone
It is firmly tattooed
All over my heart. ---------------- ohhh, thats good writing!

[Lizanne]

Always perfection, if ever anything less I would feel an imposter was signing your name. Really a true poetic love poem. How painful a love to tatoo the heart.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very exquisitely beautiful piece. This was an heart stirring piece. Very well written.

[Linda Stinson]

Talk about some love, I think you got it going on here. I need some pointers. This is such a lovely poem, but then you have the gift for it. Very enduring this one shall be.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

Love is such a beautiful emotion! I liked this poem very much because it showed how giddy guys can be. I think that is a wonderful triumph :-) Awesome job

[Fran Marie]

My love for you
Is written all over my face.
Though not carved in stone
It is firmly tattooed
All over my heart.


A most beautiful and pasionate declaration of love~ such lovely expression in poetic verse
so wonderfully presented ~Superb Pen!

[Stephanie]

I bascially just melted everywhere! This poem is so sweet, romantic, beautiful, brilliant, amazing and many other words I don't have time to think of. Expressing your love in such a way....oh man, it was poetic brilliance. My favorite lines:

"Sweet dreamy eyes
Lifts my spirit to the clouds
Putting the moon in reach
And it shines
Through the color of my eyes."

It painted a picture and it was a new kind of love poem. Super awesome job! :]