Sweet Venom

  

Your venomous bite

Makes my body ache

Still I crave another.

Feeling the poison

Burning up my veins

I close my eyes to dream,

Now space and earth

Are one in the same.

No more confusion

Being lost in infinity.

Thoughts so entwined

Yet everything makes sense.

Inside this world of illusion

Has made everything clear.

Angels turning to demons

In the blink of an eye,

Your sweet venom

Has made everything right.

 

Reviews

[Lizanne]

Would like to think this is about love. Alas there are two types and they are both physically and psychologically connected. But with the vein involved, I feel there are two choices either you are making love to a concubine of a vampire or the girl with the golden eyes has her needle like clutches in you.
I love this piece it draws on the emotions and gives a deep insight to desire. Whether it be lust or chemical. Both can be addictive.

[Laura Sparkle]

I absolutely adore this poem! I love the message, the way its written. The oBsessive seduction hidden in her and her control over the man writing it. Brilliant!

[Wildfleour]

I'm digging this one..........a bit of good and bad!

[Sheila Kline]

Dale......total captivation, inhaling, sweet venonm coursing through the psyche, consumes, and truly makes one feel as if lost in infinity!! You have summed it up well! Even the good can be made bad and is okay with one as this..angels turn to demons...that is rendering complete control!
Nice write!

[Linda Stinson]

Well, I am not going to say what I think this is about. But I bet your were flying high. Need company? Sound like my kind of fun. Cowboy still knocking them out of the park. Keep it up. The book is on the horizon, if not already there.

[Anastasia Starlena]

The battle between good and evil sometimes in such a seductive thing or can be. Where there is venom there is always heart ache but the venom at times is presenting sweetness ready to allure. Great piece.