Tanning

another chofu- just having some fun

  

As I watch the sun

Glisten

Off your silky Goddess skin

The shimmering glow

Is like

Looking into heaven’s light.

Reviews

[Frances O'Neill]

Nicely written!

[Margaret]

Wow, I like it.. brought back memories of my younger days on the beaches of South Florida. You have a way with words my friend, your visualization was superb.

[Sorry Infamous]

Is that how I look when I tan?
all joking aside - this was wonderfully written. Beautiful discriptions.

[Honeypot]

This might be short, but what a punch it has! Its full of love, almost worshipful and it has such a wonderful feel to it. Loved it!

[Sheila Kline]

That kind of glow casts a beautiful light like that of Heaven! Simply beautiful!

[closed account]

very nice,, tan skin is a good thing,, infact it's a great thing... I got
to try the chofu sometime

(where ever did that person get that name,,)

[Babbette Francis]

Sweet!!

A Very creative Chofu!! Wow!!! This is nice. Classy!! LOVED IT

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

wonderful. i love a graet tan too, i'm thinking about doing that sunless tanning thing this month. lol. it almost seems like a quote from a great tanning lotion commercial. which is saying a lot.

"silky Goddesss skin" love that line. i can tell you like tan women dale. lol.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Nothing like a good healthy glow. Great piece very well written.