Damn Dale, you are getting better and better. i love this poem, absolutely love it. so sincere, so romantic and passionate, and like a bryan adams song, "everything i do i do it for you." The metaphors in this piece are off the chain, and they all work well together, and end with the analogy of a rose, and instead of a cliche of talking about a woman being the rose, YOU are the rose. nice touch. thanks for sharing.
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This was absolutely beautiful, cowboy. *smile* I loved every line of it, and especially the parts about bringing colour and new life. I can tell that you put so much thought and feeling into this one. Wonderful. =)
Such a powerful poem.
To sacrifice oneself for another, out of pure love.
Something that people scorn because our society often emphasizes this idea that self is always more important.
Great to see that not everyone is taken up by that kinda storm.
As a romantic though, this appealed to me even more.
Great write.
my good ness this is the prettiest poem i think i like this best of all others....very sweet and sincere...will add this to my favs........boo sends you kisses and so do i thanks for all the things you find me on the net...hope your day is delightful and fun....x0x0x0x00x0x0
Damn Dale, you are getting better and better. i love this poem, absolutely love it. so sincere, so romantic and passionate, and like a bryan adams song, "everything i do i do it for you." The metaphors in this piece are off the chain, and they all work well together, and end with the analogy of a rose, and instead of a cliche of talking about a woman being the rose, YOU are the rose. nice touch. thanks for sharing.
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Spoken with the heart of a true romantic, you have taken the delicate rose as a means of sacrifice, of protection and of endless love and desire. From "the relentless red sky" to "I thou sacrifice" you have created a beautiful love song the melody forever softly playing.
Very beautiful, to sacrifice your self for love is the
most selfless act of love one can give another,
the picture is stunning and love the different style
of writing from you,, keep us on our toes Dale!
it's working,, cause I am feeling the love... very nice!
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
About
Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..