Now She

Some new lyrics from me

  

Just a midnight heart

In the land of the morning sun

To afraid to face the light

So I sore shades to make me cool

Till the day she came into view

Suddenly just being me was all I needed.

 

Finally I could dream

And all I could think was

 

If she were my breath

I would be the wind

If she were my heartbeat

I would be immortal

If she were a part of me

I would be complete

 

 

Once upon a jaded time

Only seeing was believing to me

Now one smile from her face

And heaven becomes my reality

For she holds my heart

Without chains or strings binding me.

 

Now it is a dream

Knowing that she is loving me

 

Now she is my breath

I flying free from pain

Now she is my heartbeat

I am now forever living

Now she is a part of me

I’m feeling like a man

 

With her by my side

The world is finally spinning

With her as my life

Fear of tomorrow is no more.

 

 

Now she is my breath

I flying free from pain

Now she is my heartbeat

I am now forever living

Now she is a part of me

I’m feeling like a man

 

 

 

Author's Note

Before anyone asks no they are not written for anyone, just thinking of how love can change your life and help you grow.

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Hahahaha! I just read you 'author's note'!

It would be beautiful to watch life have a new meaning by knowing a love like this!
I absolutely love this! Are you ever going to publish your writings? This is incredible...
It's like a beautiful love song or one of those movies that you can watch over and over again.
A new favorite!!!!!!!!!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

i personally, love this lil poem....great job ...x0x0x0

[shythatway]

"Suddenly just being me was all I needed", that must be such a wonderful feeling =) I'd like to hear this to music, too. Thank you for sharing =)

[Fran Marie]

Once upon a jaded time
Only seeing was believing to me
Now one smile from her face
And heaven becomes my reality


Breathtakingly Beautiful!! Dale~

a truly lovely piece of poetry~to be sure,so nicely penned my friend

[Brianna Brie]

Now she is my breath
I flying free from pain
Now she is my heartbeat
I am now forever living
Now she is a part of me
I'm feeling like a man

Wow, Dale, this is an absolutely fabulous piece. This just has that extra special something!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I love it...its wonderful
Great Job

[Voice]

It's so beautiful I just love it...I hope I get to hear this on the radio someday I truly love the lyrics it's absolutely breathtaking. What a romantic write...

Voice

[Katherine Wyatt]

This is beautiful...to find love.is definitely like breathing...a wonderful write!

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very beautiful lyrics.. Such a very soft flowing piece. It is a piece very exquisite and spoken true to heart.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Nice tribute to finding love in one's life.. great flow and feeling here in your lyrics.. Okay so this wasn't written for someone but maybe this is a dream of finding someone coming through just a little here.. either way dreamy write and it would be lovely to hear it play as a song! Your writings are always so touching.. keep dreaming and writing.. =)