After The Black And White

  

After the clouds of black and white

Get carried away…

 

Red velvet sky

Brings new life

To the majestic river

With nowhere to run.

 

Suddenly colorful purpose

Flows through

Crystal clear thoughts

Till the waterfall…

 

Teaches you life’s greatest lesson,

Suddenly your not afraid of drowning.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Dale...this reminds me of the thought of ...once you ride a bike, you never forget how to ride it...for some reason.
Getting the stuff out of the way allows us to make that final dive, take that next step, as we are no longer afraid, or held back by the obstacles in our path.
There's a lot to think about in this write....until the waterfall...interesting!

[Anya]

beautiful and very powerful poem
"To the majestic river
With nowhere to run." I love those lines :)

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

i'ts a nice poem, not my favorite one from you, but that's okay. good imagrey, and a nice concept. well, on to review more!!