Cryptic Desire

  

A fog covered dream

Of an angel bathing

In brimstone fire.

The charcoal waterfall

Offers no solution.

 

The devil watches

In wild eyed amazement

While he whispers

In my ear,

 

“Shhh…Do not tell the wizard

of that you so desire

or your requiem

will be out of tune”

 

Cryptic his is words

But deep in my soul  

I know…

 

I know therefore I fear!!!

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Hmmm not sure how to interpret this.. but have a feeling that the written word might be invovled.

As often happens you lure your reader with the carrot-words and move her/him into another place. Your own personal devil seems to be very active at the moment, Dale.. take care, my friend. :))

Love the format as well as the content. Thank you, thank you for sharing.

[Liza]

the image drew me in
the symphony of words reached my inner depth
ahhh the inner fight within is so evident
who wins...fear? or courage...so much to decide...

[Nella]

Gorgeous ...

"I know therefore I fear!!!"

Truth speaks so profoundly in those words.

:)

[trinityluv122]

its like your in the garden of eden again, fearing the wrath of god for eating the forbidden fruit, a bite of this fruit displaced the fear withih the soul,

But a great write, intriging

Lara

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

----love all the imagery,
great word of choice, ----mishel

[Gandré]

I like your mystic desire and the Unknown, the playful angel and as we are both, the devil was inspiriing and so playfull, too. sweet darkness.

[razormuse]

oh i love how you write! your in the same dark realm as i am. wonderful!
you should allow ratings..i'd give you 100

[closed account]

ohhhh looooove it! I found this scary and sexy at the same time?
omg!! how strange the two emotions almost Hot!! lol,, crazy,, Dale?
this was very clever and haunting, mixing your desire for forbidden fruits!! lol
this was an EXCELLENT WRITE!! Thanks for sharing this with all your friends!!
great...

[EmpressPoetess]

"But deep in my soul I know�I know therefore I fear!!!"......Desiring something that you Know could be deadly? Fearing because you DO have this desire? Tempted! That's what I get from this!....Great crypted write!

[54321]

oh kinda lusty... but im not sure i understand it fully... can you explain it to me?