Unspoken

it is what it is

  

It may never be known

Yet it runs deep.

 

It is not to be touched

Still I can feel it.

 

It is not mine to cherish

Somehow I find it priceless.

 

It will remain unspoken

Though my heart can hear it.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was beautiful..
Such a thoughtful and deep piece of writing it is!
I loved the flow and how effortlessly as a reader I could relate it to myself, I guess we all can relate ourselves with it in some or other way and thats what makes this piece so special :)

Though I loved the entire piece of writing, but for me the closing lines out stands -
"It will remain unspoken
Though my heart can hear it." - It is very rare when we read anything so deep and true.
Really, touched the very core of me :)


Great work .

[[untitled]]

Oh, I like this. I'm thinking you are describing 'a yearning' that goes unclaimed and "unspoken". For love perhaps? Something more meaningful which will keep one grounded, alive and looking forward to the future? Yes sometimes poetry is what it is, and that's what makes it special and keeps the reader in a pondering state.

Nice~

[closed account]

a different write from you,, I am guessing like the others
what it is about, sounds like a love secret or an envy of
some sort,, I lke the mystery behind the words, this is
greatness!!

[Honeypot]

It seems like its about somebody cherished from afar. Its got such a strong sense of longing and sadness to it. Its a really great poem, but then again, I don't think you write bad ones.

[Anastasia Starlena]

love, secrets and sweet cherish.... SO many things could invoke this emotion. Great piece.

[Wildfleour]

Yes, Cowboy! I can relate.

here ----- hear.

[Melon Choly]

and it will be, soon :)

[54321]

hmmm tricky.... your care for another is my guess.... beautiful.

[An owl on the moon]

Profoundly moving, this thing just beyond grasping, beyond holding, always out of reach, yet treasured. A feeling deeply expressed...

[Matthew Paul]

Short, deep and meaningful. A nice poem here.