Like The Rain

It rained today and i was inspired

  

As I watch the rain

Drizzle ever so gently

Across these wide open plains

The thought of your sensitive lips

Speaking such eloquent words

From the depths of your soul

And I picture them caressing my skin

Quenching desires beyond even God’s eyes.

 

After the rain…

 

I deeply inhale that scent

Of a planet reborn,

My mind can’t help but

Compare it too

Every breath you breathe

That brings new life to humanity

Simply cause you‘re alive.

 

Like the rain falling

I would fall from grace

To give you everything I have.

 

For like the rain’s destiny

Here on earth

I couldn’t help but…

 

FALL

 

Reviews

[J.Black]

How I adore the rain, the way it can caress my heart and body at the same time.

[Bud]

Yes, we do fall for and in love like the rain that pours from the heavens above! Excellent piece!

[Sheila Kline]

The gentle sound of the falling rain has indeed inspired a passionate, but sweet write of love! It is so soothing, and it just flows like raindrops falling one by one off the roof into a jar of everlasting love!
This is truly beautiful Dale!
Hugs, and Love
Sheila

[Marina]

Beautiful writing.

I love how you correlated the rain with a human. . . i love the analogy.
I would have never been able to do that.

Great words, flow...your whole idea.

Awsome job.

StaySweet...or else.
Rina

[closed account]

STUNNING....... pure and simple,, this was so chrming
the rain brings out the romance in people and it
showed from your eyes to ours... great job
beautiful...

[Anastasia Starlena]

Ahhh to fall isn't that what we all love to do is fall in love. Very captivating sensual piece.

[Cherry Berry]

Breathtakingly beautiful... I love the rain. I always have. Well penned.
xox
Cherri

[Emily B]

that rain is always falling

humanity falls

hearts fall

nice words :)