Falling

  

To have someone special

holding you when

The darkest of nights

Grows cold

Is worth breathing for.

 

To find that someone

Who’s devotion goes

As deep as yours

Till death do you part

Is worth living for.

 

To know you have someone

That loves you with

Unconditional support

When all else fails

Is worth fighting for…

 

But when you don’t have

These things to consider

Then danger is no fear

And falling over the edge

Is not the end.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

So true and full of life they way you have written it and yet it's in simplicity.. your ending is also one of great meaning..

But when you don't have
These things to consider
Then danger is no fear
And falling over the edge
Is not the end.

This ending is so correct.. thank you so much for sharing!!!=)

[deeps]

Very true, Emotional write you have penned

[Wunderlich]

Very true. Excellent write, man.

[~angelalala~]

"..when The darkest of nights Grows cold Is worth breathing for." & "To find that someone Who's devotion goes As deep as yours Till death do you part" such intense & powerful statements. then the end took my breath away. it came out of nowhere like a punch in the face. but i loved it. it starts off sounding like this is going to be a gorgeous love poem, then bam! pow! that last stanza "Then danger is no fear And falling over the edge Is not the end." it is true. when you have no one or nothing to live for, self-destruction can be inevitable. life alone is lived more dangerously & without care. i was there. & still am to a certain degree. so therefore i loved this & can relate. so beautifully written, & dark. & deep.