She's The Woman

 

Like the magnificent waves of the ocean

Caressing the rocks with its pure touch

She’s the woman that cleanses my soul.

 

Like the endless blue of the clear sky

Illuminating all of God’s creations

She’s the woman that puts faith in my beliefs.

 

Like the full moon hypnotizing the night sky

Watching over those lost in the dark

She’s the woman that puts humanity in my heart.

 

Like the highest peak of Mount Everest

That displays beauty as far as the eye can see

She’s the woman that takes my breath away.

 

Like the dreams that captivate my sleep

Then vanish when I awaken to reality

She’s the woman I see but just out of reach.

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I don't think I've ever been first to a "Cowboy" premiere, so I'll speed it up.
You know I always love your stuff. You have a way with the ladies and I'm sure they appreciate it.
You're great at expressing feelings w/o losing any masculine points in the process.
No "standing on mountain tops" and all that bullshit.

"Like the endless blue of the clear sky
Illuminating all of God's creations
She's the woman that puts faith in my beliefs."

Great words!!! I may have to borrow again, because my date tonight is because of "Beauty"(I'll let you know how it goes). Great write again!

[closed account]

what a beautiful display of words you put together, amazingly written
all you describe in why this women is so special to you is so deep and
real! the inner beauty that she bestows and how she cleanses your soul
and brings your beliefs back is simply powerful.. This was so easy to the
eyes as it was released from the lips!! Great Write..

[just is]

This is such a soft and most beautiful write here, Such a dreamy write, I like this, written from the heart I can tell.

[cilla]

This is so soft and dreamy and one to make any girl's heart flutter and fall in love all over again � why spoil this love filled dream with such an melancholy ending?

My preferred ending �.

Unlike the dreams that captivate my sleep
Then vanish when I awaken to reality
She's the woman I see lying next to me.

This is truly beautiful regardless of the ending. Your poetic head is in a very wonderful place.

[~angelalala~]

this is gorgeous. i love the imagery, the subtle repetition, this is absolutely beautiful & breath-taking. i think my favorite lines are "She's the woman that cleanses my soul." & "She's the woman that puts faith in my beliefs". these are powerful statements, as are the rest. what a perfect way to end each stanza. another gorgeous write, your talent blows me away. seriously.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh these words are a surefire way to a woman's heart.. to truly know the soul of a good woman as is written here about somebody is just magnificient to say the least. There is always beauty in everyone.. the image you painted of this woman was one of inner-beauty, self-sacrifice and non-selfishness.. love it!!! Thank you for sharing! Great flow, use of imaginative words and technique as always =) It's simply always an honour to read your work!

[Wildfleour]

Find her, grab her, never let go.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This is really a beautiful poem. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Debileah