Get Your Tongue Out Of My Mouth, I'm Trying To Kiss You Goodbye

Get Your Tongue Out Of My Mouth, I'm Trying To Kiss You Goodbye

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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I want to thank my dear friend Sandy Beaches for the title and challenge

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Well of course I packed my suitcase,

 

Did you think I’d leave without some clothes?

 

I told you bout this a while ago…

 

I guess you were

 

Too wrapped up in your self again to pay attention.

 

 

Why I couldn’t leave without a few things

 

And I know you were too busy with Jim Beam.

 

 

I can’t see what the big deal is…

 

It’s not like you will even notice,

 

Half the time I am a ghost around here

 

While you’re living just to party.

 

 

I’ve told you where I am staying…

 

 

Even wrote it down, you probably threw it out

 

Like you do my feelings when we talk.

 

 

I guess one kiss before I leave wouldn’t hurt…

 

              Damn girl get your tongue out of my mouth,

 

I’m kissing you goodbye not taking you to bed.

 

 

Once again you’re not listening…

 

And you wonder why I’m leaving.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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ooooohhhhhhhh shoot..... this was good, love the attitude, the self confidence that
you represent! the assertivness of why you are leaving.. and most important!!!
you state why you are gone... great job.. with this.. this was actually a book i read
well the title anyway,, I loved it,,, you didn't even know, cause I didn't tell you that
but excuted it right on... thank you!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"I guess one kiss before I leave wouldn't hurt�Damn girl get your tongue out of my mouth" laughing hystericially! i loved this one. so witty, sarcastic, & yet so true. god i've been with a few of those people. so wrapped up in their own heads, their own lives, you talk til your blue in the face, only to realize, it has all gone in one ear, & flown away out of the other. this is a wonderful write & it really made me smile. it's simple & yet powerful & honest. i love the 'get your tongue out of my mouth' idea, i'm still laughing :)



Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ooooohhhhhhhh shoot..... this was good, love the attitude, the self confidence that
you represent! the assertivness of why you are leaving.. and most important!!!
you state why you are gone... great job.. with this.. this was actually a book i read
well the title anyway,, I loved it,,, you didn't even know, cause I didn't tell you that
but excuted it right on... thank you!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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