Touch/Feel

  

I touch the candle

To light the flame

Reminding me of

The light in your eyes.

As I await your return

To this house so cold

Turning it back into

A home so warm.

 

I touch the sheets

We lay between

Sharing dreams and

Fight nightmares as one.

I can feel

Our future firmly built

On the foundation

Of every treasured memory.

 

 

Upon your return

I touch my chest

To feel what beats

Only for you.

 

 

 

I touch your hand

Tracing my fingers

Along your silky skin

Like feathers from heaven.

Suddenly I can feel

The rush of passion

Flowing through your skin

That baptizes me with life.

 

I touch your heart

With no hands

I feel your love

No strings attached.

 

 

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

I touch your heart

With no hands

I feel your love

No strings attached.

but wait... not yet..
Let me say.. that where Jealousy is not present.. Love is there.. so pure and yet so fragile..
You are a romantic at heart.. and a lover in the soul
I never knew it until now.. and this is such a beautiful poem.. made by the heart of a man..
Lucky you..

[Erotic Goddess]

Suddenly I can feel
The rush of passion
Flowing through your skin
That baptizes me with life.

Dale, this is beautiful. I love this piece, you wove such beautiful words and feelings into this poem. Great job making this so emotional.

xxoxx
Goddess

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

What a lovely poem, indeed. So romantic and delicate. Like a flower. Delightful.
Light,
Siddartha

[Rhine Wolf]

Wow That was just brilliant i can feel the emotion flowing,

Blessed be,
Fallon

[Windy]

Amazing write! I don't know what I can say that hasn't already been said by one of the other reviews. I personally think it is one of your best pieces yet. I like the romance and passion you are comming out with, there is nothing better in life if you ask me... Well done, extremely well done my friend. What else have you got hidden away in there?? I'd love to get a look at it!! Write on Cowboy....

[Lauren Beth]

I really loved this one, it evoked true emotion that I can definately relate to. I like
"As I await your return
To this house so cold
Turning it back into
A home so warm."
When that one person is gone everything feels so cold and empty...
But...I really like all of it! Great write!

[Legion]

True passion. True romance. Truth that is true. Kudos.

[The DuchessPoet]

Um... this is the intimacy that only a passionate interlude can explain!
Your words:
"I touch the sheets

We lay between

Sharing dreams and

Fight nightmares as one.

And I can feel

Our future firmly built

On the foundation

Of every treasured memory.



I touch your hand

Tracing my fingers

Along your silky skin

Like feathers from heaven.

Suddenly I can feel

The rush of passion

Flowing through your skin

That baptizes me with life."

I love it passionate Cowboy!
I LOVE IT!

[J.Black]

Fantastic Dale! You haven't lost the flame.

[just is]

Such a passionate write this is, very well written too, I like this.

[Wildfleour]

Nice!

I agree with Ralphy. The poems seem to be intensifying.