Touch/Feel

Touch/Feel

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

  

I touch the candle

To light the flame

Reminding me of

The light in your eyes.

As I await your return

To this house so cold

Turning it back into

A home so warm.

 

I touch the sheets

We lay between

Sharing dreams and

Fight nightmares as one.

I can feel

Our future firmly built

On the foundation

Of every treasured memory.

 

 

Upon your return

I touch my chest

To feel what beats

Only for you.

 

 

 

I touch your hand

Tracing my fingers

Along your silky skin

Like feathers from heaven.

Suddenly I can feel

The rush of passion

Flowing through your skin

That baptizes me with life.

 

I touch your heart

With no hands

I feel your love

No strings attached.

 

 

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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I touch your heart

With no hands

I feel your love

No strings attached.

but wait... not yet..
Let me say.. that where Jealousy is not present.. Love is there.. so pure and yet so fragile..
You are a romantic at heart.. and a lover in the soul
I never knew it until now.. and this is such a beautiful poem.. made by the heart of a man..
Lucky you..

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I touch your heart

With no hands

I feel your love

No strings attached.

but wait... not yet..
Let me say.. that where Jealousy is not present.. Love is there.. so pure and yet so fragile..
You are a romantic at heart.. and a lover in the soul
I never knew it until now.. and this is such a beautiful poem.. made by the heart of a man..
Lucky you..

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very romantic! sweet beautiful poem of love and waiting for
it to return to you! You really know how to capture
the appropriate emotion with each poem

I love this..

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

such a passionate and romantic poem......wow......loved it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet and romantic.....a woman would dream of a man writing something like this to her! Very good!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent work dale, you romantic visions have a way of capturing a moment in time with sentimental effect.
what I enjoyed most, the refine syntax and clear cut, depthfully charged passion.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You truly are medicine for my soul. Such a lovely poem. As with all your work, very well written and so beautifully expressed. I also agree with Ralphy "your romantic poems are building with passion."

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Upon your return

I touch my chest

To feel what beats

Only for you

Beautiful poem cowboy! so much passion. i can tell you have a big heart, and would treat a woman like gold! whoever this woman is in this poem is a lucky woman indeed.

luv kena

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOw, Yes this really turned out very romance and breath taking, I found my self falling for her as well! lol
I really love how you have been changing up your style! Know your the untouchable!

Lovely and you sure know how to capture a lady

Much love,
Anna

Upon your return
I touch my chest
To feel what beats
Only for you.

I touch your hand
Tracing my fingers
Along your silky skin
Like feathers from heaven.
Suddenly I can feel
The rush of passion
Flowing through your skin
That baptizes me with life.

I touch your heart
With no hands
I feel your love
No strings attached.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You really touched my heart with this beautiful poem, Dale. Emotions I can strongly relate with. Beauutifully written sweetie ... Hugs - T

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As I await your return
To this house so cold
Turning it back into
A home so warm.

These words embrace the mystery of love. Wonderfully romantic write! Moving...

Posted 15 Years Ago



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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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