I love that. Lovely poem, m'dear. Love the title, and love the images. Great sentiment, and who wouldn't want to dance in teh rain with someone who loves them?? :)
oh how i love this poem. it's refreshing, it's beautiful, it's hopeful. i love the amazing imagery here such as 'heaven's violin' and 'striding across a rainbow'. the last stanza is my favorite, so hopeful, so inspirational. a gorgeous write.
Dale, if I was your woman, lol......I would be dancing the two step into puddles of passion. I enjoyed the last stanza the most, it carries a sense of positive hope....Nurturing the seed of tomorrow's spring, that is a great line. Just excellent my friend.
thanks for the review
For the World only knows.. that your soul and heart are so pure.. I love those lines on top;
you make me feel like dancing.. and this pure and unique piece has all the passion and innocence
A man and a woman can share... awesome! my friend
this is the first of your work that has caught my eye,and I must admit I love the Competition!!!
Great Work my Friend,if I may call you my friend,but really...this is good!
do you write music?I can't play a lick,but know what I like to hear in a song and the words to roll of the tongue...if you will,please read a few more and see if you might be able to hit a few notes,that is if you do write music,if not,it seems we are in the same boat...all Lyriced up and nobody to string us a tune...lol
I'm gonna read a few more of yours,so far,I like your style,clean lines and imagry...well done!
Amen. I love dancing in the rain...well, just about anything really. Feeling the wind in my face on the bike ... speaking my mind. It's so funny how something that comes so naturally is so shocking to people. KEEP DANCING IN THE RAIN MY FRIEND...f**k 'em all.
Wow Dale! This poem is absolutely beautiful as well as refreshing, rejuvenating and uplifting. I love the thought of the rain washing away the pain, cleansing, healing and starting anew! awesome my friend!
Hugs - T
AMAZING.... poetry... You did an outstanding job!! what a beautiful poem
so full of romance and the word choice was perfect!! very classy!!
I loved it,, thanks for taking on the challenge!
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
About
Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..