Nature's Cure

 

Delicate jasmine dances

On a soft breeze like a ballerina

Touching my memories

Like butterfly kisses

From childhood days.

 

Clovers spread like gypsies

Through dandelion dreams,

None of them four leafed

Though lucky all the same.

 

Sun kissed daisies

Fill my heart with sprinkles

Of pollination that develops

Into nature’s medicine

Curing what once was lost.

 

Now I have discovered

The true essence of divine being

When my eyes finally seen

What  only a blind person does.

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I loved this poem. Had such a sweet message; sometimes blind people can "see" more, because they are only allowed the senses such as sense of touch and smell, etc so they are one with their surroundings more than one who can see. I agree, many times when I was in nature, it brought back memories of childhood and others times in my life, and closing my eyes I felt one with what was around me, and how beautiful it was. THANK YOU for this poem.

kena

[Helena]

"Delicate jasmine dances
"On a soft breeze like a ballerina
Touching my memories
Like butterfly kisses
From childhood days."

So beautifully done. The first stanza drew me in like a bee to a flower.
Creative and lovely my friend, one of your best! ~ Helena

[Lori]

Very perseptive. It really tickles the senses of the reader.

[emz]

This is beautiful.... nature is the most amazing thing... it can often help cure pain... i really loved this poem Dale well done xx

[Emily B]

lovely, lovely words . . .

[~angelalala~]

this is a beautiful write. amazing imagery.
'Touching my memories

Like butterfly kisses

From childhood days.' i love these lines. & the 2nd stanza is my favorite. the sense, the feeling of discovering divinity in the power & beauty of nature. a breathtaking poem.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Thank you for this poem. I enjoyed the travel back to my childhood yet the reminder that every thing seen sometimes can be better felt in the spirit. This was a very powerful poem done with such few words. That is a gift itself.

[Robert Luna]

There where night reaches beyond dreams
I sleep no more
Hearing whispers of time calling out to me
the future gasps for air
Mindless focusing of purity of life
stumbles to find no rest
Answering questions of nothing
but everything revealed
My heart lay dormant in wait
for that one moment
I seek the truth of enlightenment
tangled among lies
The greatest journey of life
begins with one single step forward.

It is always wonderful reading your words and allowing them to inspire the imagination of a dream such as I. Truly enjoyed the entrapment of my mind's eye seeing the ideas that came to life with your words.

Great Job!!!!!!!!

[Nely Amorim]

this is beautiful. your writing is just getting better and better, your descriptive style is unique and lovely :) thanks for sharing it with me.

[Gandré]

this was feeling like pure summer dance hm dale, that's sweet "Fill my heart with sprinkles

Of pollination that develops

Into nature’s medicine

Curing what once was lost." ---------loved it !

[Spoken]

it's something special to feel the beauty in nature.. in those moments it's like everything in the universe is aligned in perfect homeostasis and you are whole..

peaceful and serene. Leaves a smile on my face!