Nature's Cure

 

Delicate jasmine dances

On a soft breeze like a ballerina

Touching my memories

Like butterfly kisses

From childhood days.

 

Clovers spread like gypsies

Through dandelion dreams,

None of them four leafed

Though lucky all the same.

 

Sun kissed daisies

Fill my heart with sprinkles

Of pollination that develops

Into nature’s medicine

Curing what once was lost.

 

Now I have discovered

The true essence of divine being

When my eyes finally seen

What  only a blind person does.

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I loved this poem. Had such a sweet message; sometimes blind people can "see" more, because they are only allowed the senses such as sense of touch and smell, etc so they are one with their surroundings more than one who can see. I agree, many times when I was in nature, it brought back memories of childhood and others times in my life, and closing my eyes I felt one with what was around me, and how beautiful it was. THANK YOU for this poem.

kena

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I love this it speaks so sensuously of nature and love.

[Lyrical Love]

I love reading your poetry it always touches something in me.
This piece has such a soft and melodic tone with the rhythm of a bubbling
brook.
Loved this one too.

[Seriana]

Awwe, this has an refreshing innocence to it. So sweet and curing, indeed.

[Windy]

Wonderful poem my friend, and congrats on the win with it. Very well written, great imagery and rhyme. A surprising yet perfect ending with your final paragraph, most especially the lines "When my eyes finally seen What only a blind person does. Very "gently" written making it even more touching. Well done, Kuddos to you my friend. Smiles...

[The DuchessPoet]

Cowboy, this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
I really enjoyed this read!

[Amanda]

what a beautiful picture you have painted and have instilled in my mind...it is renewal, pure and simple...

i just love this! thanks for sharing, Dale :)

Amanda

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL & SOFT!!! THIS IS AN AMAZING PIECE!!!

[LonelySoul]

Pure Honey...Necture of the Gods...many thanx for the picture you painted for us...
I feel like a honey bee taking that pollen back to my hive...lol
NICE WORK!!! d:?)

[Again]

i LOVE the lucky line.

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This was amazing! The smooth flow and beautiful imagery made your view of nature stand out brightly to me.
I loved these two lines.... "Clovers spread like gypsies Through dandelion dreams,"
I got the most pretty scene painted in my mind by these words.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful poem!

M. Rue