Morning Love

Morning Love

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

my first haiku

"

  

Every morning's light

The radiant red sky is

My faith in your love.

 

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but technically this is senryu not haiku since haiku can only be about seasons and spirituality or something like that according to haiku experts -- which I am most definitely not one since I've written my fair share of ones like this. So how about American haiku...we'll make this our form and let the traditionalists have their own. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This is lovely. I've always struggled with Haiku personally. You wrote a beautiful, evocative piece in just three short lines.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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so nice! I can't even get a thought started in three lines....this one is a deep breath...on a summer day. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Well cowboy for a first you did pretty darn good. I like how you connected the color of the red sky to reflections of love and romance. A very nice Haiku indeed. Nice title too.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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beautiful, smooth and it created a wonderful image for me!!!

as to the poems structure Haiku's are 5 - 7 - 5, as this is your first atempt. Well done!! (personaly i find them really hard, so i really do them.)

Blessed be,
Fallon

Posted 15 Years Ago


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A perfect little gem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I love it. you keep it simple - in words - and it evokes the most complex feeling in the reader. writing haikus is damn difficult. I thought they should be 5 -7 - 5 pattern but..... I am not sure about this. cowboy Dale pure heart i love you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Well done for your first one! I can't write them, I don't think. You did a good job. Just one line but it spoke voluums and painted a beautiful picture.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Whoa! Dale this is extremely beuatiful and magical!
Isn't that the way love should be. Softly glowing
and warming the soul. Wonderfully put.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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