The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but technically this is senryu not haiku since haiku can only be about seasons and spirituality or something like that according to haiku experts -- which I am most definitely not one since I've written my fair share of ones like this. So how about American haiku...we'll make this our form and let the traditionalists have their own. :)
Well cowboy for a first you did pretty darn good. I like how you connected the color of the red sky to reflections of love and romance. A very nice Haiku indeed. Nice title too.
I love it. you keep it simple - in words - and it evokes the most complex feeling in the reader. writing haikus is damn difficult. I thought they should be 5 -7 - 5 pattern but..... I am not sure about this. cowboy Dale pure heart i love you.
Well done for your first one! I can't write them, I don't think. You did a good job. Just one line but it spoke voluums and painted a beautiful picture.
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
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