Morning Love

my first haiku

  

Every morning's light

The radiant red sky is

My faith in your love.

 

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but technically this is senryu not haiku since haiku can only be about seasons and spirituality or something like that according to haiku experts -- which I am most definitely not one since I've written my fair share of ones like this. So how about American haiku...we'll make this our form and let the traditionalists have their own. :)

[cest la vie]

*Sigh*

Simply beautiful...

[Tracie Skarbo]

Love this...I can see the colors reflected in your eyes. Nicely done!

[EmpressPoetess]

Poignant and to the point.

[MagiCrystal]

THESE WORDS ARE ECHOES THAT MADE FEEL SOME CHILLS ALL OVER MY HEART..!
THE WIND KNOWS .. THAT LOVE IS ALWAYS ON THE SURFACE.. AND WITH THIS I CLOSE..
TIME, SPACE, AND ETERNITY... = LOVE.. SPEECHLESS

[April Child]

These are tricky fellows, look so simple and yet are not simple at all. A nice poem, haiku, senryu :)

[Charlotte]

I liked this alot, deep and meaningful.

[closed account]

very very very nice first Haiku!! beautiful... I love Haikus hmmmm I am getting inspired again!! lol

[Fran Marie]

A lovely Haiku especially for a first try at this form

Ev'ry instead of every will give you the proper 17 syllable count~

you have 18 syllables with it spelled every

Nice Job Dale~Fran

[Emily B]

These are the most beautiful perfect words. All of passion and faith and love in just three lines.