The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but technically this is senryu not haiku since haiku can only be about seasons and spirituality or something like that according to haiku experts -- which I am most definitely not one since I've written my fair share of ones like this. So how about American haiku...we'll make this our form and let the traditionalists have their own. :)
THESE WORDS ARE ECHOES THAT MADE FEEL SOME CHILLS ALL OVER MY HEART..!
THE WIND KNOWS .. THAT LOVE IS ALWAYS ON THE SURFACE.. AND WITH THIS I CLOSE..
TIME, SPACE, AND ETERNITY... = LOVE.. SPEECHLESS
The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but technically this is senryu not haiku since haiku can only be about seasons and spirituality or something like that according to haiku experts -- which I am most definitely not one since I've written my fair share of ones like this. So how about American haiku...we'll make this our form and let the traditionalists have their own. :)
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..