When The Weeping Willow Cries

  

 

When that weeping willow cries

It feeling the pain of neglect

Mother nature feels.

 

When the weeping willow cries

It sees how hard everyday life is

On mother earth

 

When the weeping willow cries

It can’t believe how lonely

The children of the night are.

 

So when you see the weeping willow cry

Don’t ask her why, ask humanity.

Reviews

[J.Black]

Nice Dale, this was simply alot better then the one I wrote in less then 5 minutes, haha. I should probably go back and re-construct it, but oh well. I think you should deserve to win, and add another award to the ones I already gave you! Ha!

"So when you see the weeping willow cry
Don't ask her why, ask humanity."

-- I couldn't agree any more with you!!!

[Fran Marie]

When the weeping willow cries

It sees how hard everyday life is

On mother earth

Such sadness to see Mother Earth suffer the indignities
of mankind~ Superb pen!! Dale

Fran

[Dawn Davis]

Very good write I love how you have put this into play great job and good luck on the contest!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was a great take on the reasoning side of the question. I think of Mother Earth as a singular entity, a living being, her rivers and winds as her circulatory system, the boiling lava, her blood, the trees and plants her coverings and the animals, her children. Mankind has become an infecting parasite though and the earth will heal herself in time but she just may shake us humans from her skirts like a bad case of fleas because we do not honor her or give her the respect she deserves. She is over 4 billion years old and has more than a few tricks up her sleave.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes....tears are created by humanity's failure to turn a new leaf! Well thought out and expressed!

[just is]

Wow! So very true!
This is sad. Lovely wording
and I liked how you used the phrase.
Wonderfully written.

[Angel Baby]

Wow, powerful words written here.....many times I asked myself....why? Great write. Thanks for sharing your talented work. P.W.