The tree....it is very Peter Pan...very Lost Boys....and I think, that when we grow up, and mature, and get into the doldrums of being an adult, we lose sight of our tree, of our "Hook" and the whimsy that goes along with it. You've captured it well here.
That is amazing! I Love the imagry, the whole idea that the roots of great idea's are inspired by our deepest thoughts and that all we have to do is revisit that well within ourselves to find what we need to regenerate as we need.
The tree....it is very Peter Pan...very Lost Boys....and I think, that when we grow up, and mature, and get into the doldrums of being an adult, we lose sight of our tree, of our "Hook" and the whimsy that goes along with it. You've captured it well here.
Absolutely mesmerizing and enchanting. I felt as if I were in the tree myself.
You did a surperb job of describing this Fantasty Tree and all the magical powers
it possesses. I love Fantasy and the idea of a fantasy tree is fabulous and you have
made it come true in the readers mind.
I don't know if the contest is over yet, as I am behind in my reading, but if this didn't or
doesn't win someone isn't reading it right,
Very beautiful and mystical. I love it.
wow!! you really dug deep and went with it!! what I did was read the poem first
then glared at the picture!! you have an amazing immagination but it worked!! cause
I seen it!! lol,, wonderful work!! I love these picture poems.. :-)
With well picked metaphors you have expressed an amazing perspective of this picture. I am able to "see" through your words, and that is a gift. Beautiful work! Chris**
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..