The Dawning Of New Internal Life

 

A glowing beacon of soft yellow notions

Lights up the dawn of a brilliant new day

Turning the darkest of nights into

The most breathtaking of sunrises

Breathing new life into lungs

Gasping for a reason to believe in

The atmosphere that we share…

The translucent glow captures the attention

Of two green moons that now shimmer with hope

As they now see the way to shine

So the world can finally see

The true beauty these eyes desperately need

And forever  want to be.

Reviews

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Bravo...a gracious, positive reflection on one's inner man and which direction he wishes to endeavor. Your tone is quiescent. I really feel the serene ambiance here. Wonderful writing, absolutely wonderful.

[just is]

Oh! Wow! This is ever so beautiful as well as touching.

So the world can finally see
The true beauty these eyes need
That I want to be.

I really liked thse lines here, this is wonderful and very beautiful.
She did a wonderful job and so did you.

[Seriana]

Dale, it's soft and lovely. And nice piece to comfort the soul, no? I'm glad I could inspire you to write something. It always helps when I'm in a funk to write something soothing. Nicely done!