The Dawning Of New Internal Life

 

A glowing beacon of soft yellow notions

Lights up the dawn of a brilliant new day

Turning the darkest of nights into

The most breathtaking of sunrises

Breathing new life into lungs

Gasping for a reason to believe in

The atmosphere that we share…

The translucent glow captures the attention

Of two green moons that now shimmer with hope

As they now see the way to shine

So the world can finally see

The true beauty these eyes desperately need

And forever  want to be.

Reviews

[THERISA]

Through this poem, Dale, you allow the reader, to share in the rebirth of your soul. Finding beauty, in a sunrise, which we take for granted. Thank you, for sharing this moment in your life.

[Tracie Skarbo]

Breathing new life into lungs
Gasping for a reason to believe in

I love these lines...you paint a wonderful skyscape as you delve deeper into your soul and take a look within...beautiful!

[Dawn Davis]

Very deep and emotional I really like this one short and simple straight to the feeling of the heart! well done!

[☮]

What a relevant poem for the approaching New Year. It's the reason we continue each day... for that new understanding and the excitement of what is to come. Nice piece here!

[emmajoy]

Utterly beautiful.

[Courtney]

this poem is inspiring...it's one of those poems that people should put in their library to read when they're feeling down. And yes, i agree: there is always a new opportunity around the corner.

[MagiCrystal]

BRAVO, BRAVO... THIS IS SWEET... SO CUTE.. !.. SOOO!

[Wildfleour]

That's the beauty of every day - opportunity to try anew.

[Fran Marie]

The translucent glow captures the attention

Of two green moons that now shimmer with hope


A most beautiful piece filled with hope and new inspirations
nicely expressed and well penned~Fran

[Meradee]

This piece is beautiful. I love this, 'Turning the darkest of nights in to the most brilliant of sunrises'. This shows that hope can turn the darkest of moments beautiful. This piece is inspirational.
Pepper...