In The Still Of The Night

  

Midnight mayhem

Hypnotizes

Lunar eyes,

Making me howl,

Making me sigh.

My teeth as sharp

As my passion

Thirsting for your

Blood red lust.

Stalking the dark

Feel me from behind

Sacrificing my craving

Between your demonic thighs.

Panting,

Moaning,

Craving…

The animal in me

Becomes reality

Every time the moon arises.

Hear my longing cries

In the still of the night.

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

The words jump off the page at me, and shout, MORE, MORE, MORE!!....intensely passionate with gutteral animal needs fullfilled.........as, the animal in all of us pants and craves, and moans!.......lunar eyes making me howl.............got me searching for the moon in a cloudless sky!
Excellent visual write with a vast array of lustful yearnings!!

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

I really like the way you let the reader take
this piece where the wanted to go with it
Much more sensual when it is done this way
Good Job
Hugs
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[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Wow it's hot in here!!!!!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

So Wolfie...very passionate write. Compelling read. Thank you for sharing such vivid words.
Light,
Siddartha

[Helena]

Whew! I hear your longing cries in the still of the night....I really do,
how could one NOT hear the howling, "the panting, the moaning"
that came screaming out of this lustful, animalistic write. Pure passion
unbridled. Good job cowboy! ~ Helena ;)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I think "satisfying" is a better adjective that "sacrificing" where you have that, just a thought. This is ruggedly sexual on the dark side, lusting after the savage beast in us all, and kind of fun too. A good read.

[Fran Marie]

Panting,

Moaning,

Craving�

The animal in me

Becomes reality

Every time the moon arises.

Hear my longing cries

In the still of the night.




Whoa!! Smokin' HoT! This poem SiZZles right across the page~Great WritE!!

Fran

[Janice Ann]

Whoa...Mmm...You made me pant! LOL This one is different from a lot of your others because it is less actually definition...you leave it to the readers imagination and man oh man my imagination is going wild...come taste my Blood red lust...I'll let you! HEHE

Loved it!

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Yup, definitely sexy. I agree, you put your pen down on this one. It's edgy, animalistic with a lining of mounting frustration. I see you pulling hair, scratching and growling; all of the above during 'IT'.

[~amanda~]

very creepy but intriguing. i love the structure and your voice. this is definitely a poem where the more you read it the more you discover... truly a gem! thanks for sharing!

[Flame DM]

you animal! Love how you used a werewolf for comparison, your love 'the full moon' just brings the beast out of you!

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