Ocean Desperado

 

Melancholy heart

Heading for disaster

EPIC…  of Titanic essence

 

Sunken memories

Lost at sea

Relics… treasures in a pirate’s chest

 

Gasping though hoping… to suffocate

Take my last breathe before

Being washed ashore…

 

Maybe

Just maybe

It’s where I should be

 

On an island

 

       Deserted… surrounded by sharks.

 

 

Reviews

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As of late I've been reading some very diverse writing from you RRC. This only confirms how much depth and flexibility your creative mind possesses. It is a true gift indeed to be able to compose such outstanding works. I love the last 2 lines. It was both unexpected and surrendering. I also like the rhythm. Nice work.

[Wildfleour]

Sounds like danger lurks, but from a distance. The "island" seems your safest bet! :)

[gravitylava]

This is cool...It's deep. It's sad but yet happy, in the way that it's such a good poem. It makes me happy to see such good work. Good job =D.
nice.
-michelle

[Flame DM]

Its so depressing but i loved the analogy. Titanic was a ship of hope and vast proportion but then it crashed and became a nightmare, just like how a relationship starts and ends and then the feelings afterwards with the island and sharks. loved it, well penned

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[just is]

Well written, I don't want you around Sharks that's for sure, well expressed emotions.

[Blackbirdsong]

Hopefully this isn't about how you're feeling right now because dang you really express feelings of frustration and sadness here. Maybe you just need to sit back and have a beer and tease those sharks from the shore where they can't get you.