Miracle

  

I know you are

 

         A miracle walking this earth.

 

Escaping the reaches… of death.

 

Proving once again

 

         Angels aren’t just for heaven…

 

                  Making me a believer

 

Now you should know

 

         That you are also…

 

a miracle to my heart.

 

Your sincere emotions are a divine light

 

That guide me to the other side…

 

                  Where pain and hate cannot cross.

 

Your deepest secrets are

 

         Sacred Ground… that I will guard

 

With every breath you inspire.

 

Simply hearing your voice is

 

A power ballad

 

         Bringing out the best

 

                  In my deepest feelings… that I cry

 

Your skin is the silk sheets

 

         I want tangled up in our legs

 

As we make love till the break of day… still wanting more

 

Your heart is a bed of roses

 

         I fertilize with love and adoration

 

                  So it blooms open wide…

 

And the world can see why you are my bouquet

 

That pollinates my world with the miracle of

 

Nature’s sweet honey.

 

Reviews

[Velveteen Rabbit]

Breathtaking! What I really love about this poem is the use and repetition of words like "miracle", "sacred ground", and "divine light". One of the themes seems to be that love, the love between the two of you, is holy.
I am glad to have read this, thank you for giving me sweet thoughts before I drift off to sleep tonight. :)

[desertraven]

incredible piece! So heart felt and loving. Well done.
Sandi

[Victoria Lee~]

aww cowboy..this so beautiful.............

[Brianna Brie]

Your heart is a bed or roses
I fertilize with love and adoration
So it blooms open wide�

Great image use in this poem. Absolutely beautiful...

[Kiara]

incredibly amazing! love written so divine with emotion flowing gracefully through : )

[An owl on the moon]

Beautiful write, expressing with such eloquence the love and devotion that reaches to one's last breath. Brilliant...

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

BEAUTIFUL WRITE!!!!

[Windy]

Lovely, truly an emotional write. I have to agree with all the other reviews, it is a great write and you show your heart and talent excellantly with this poem. Congratulations on another job well done. Hugs

[The DuchessPoet]

"Your deepest secrets are
Sacred Ground� that I will guard
With every breath you inspire."

Cowboy, I want more than anything someone that I can feel completely vulnerable to... someone that I can share my secrets with... someone that will LIKE and love me for ME!!!!
You write to my heart and I luv you for it... you are the scared heart that writes about the miracles of love!

This is an EXCEPTIONAL write!

[Wildfleour]

So sensual and beautifully written. An adoration that comes from appreciation of another's mind, body and soul.