Miracle

  

I know you are

 

         A miracle walking this earth.

 

Escaping the reaches… of death.

 

Proving once again

 

         Angels aren’t just for heaven…

 

                  Making me a believer

 

Now you should know

 

         That you are also…

 

a miracle to my heart.

 

Your sincere emotions are a divine light

 

That guide me to the other side…

 

                  Where pain and hate cannot cross.

 

Your deepest secrets are

 

         Sacred Ground… that I will guard

 

With every breath you inspire.

 

Simply hearing your voice is

 

A power ballad

 

         Bringing out the best

 

                  In my deepest feelings… that I cry

 

Your skin is the silk sheets

 

         I want tangled up in our legs

 

As we make love till the break of day… still wanting more

 

Your heart is a bed of roses

 

         I fertilize with love and adoration

 

                  So it blooms open wide…

 

And the world can see why you are my bouquet

 

That pollinates my world with the miracle of

 

Nature’s sweet honey.

 

Reviews

[Velveteen Rabbit]

Breathtaking! What I really love about this poem is the use and repetition of words like "miracle", "sacred ground", and "divine light". One of the themes seems to be that love, the love between the two of you, is holy.
I am glad to have read this, thank you for giving me sweet thoughts before I drift off to sleep tonight. :)

[Nautili]

So lovely....you are a very deliberate gardener, I am sure your flowers shall bloom in porportion to your tending....

[Simply Watching]

Very sweet and heartfelt. I loved the imagery and metaphors used in this work. One thing though, I think that is supposed to say "your heart is a bed OF roses", instead, it says "bed or roses". Besides that, it is beautiful:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for the review and finding that error. OOPPPS

[Simply Watching]

Haha. No problem. It was an easy one to miss.

[Dreamwind]

This seems so like I would believe it is to be truly loved, and appreciated. The words are beautiful.

[MagiCrystal]

I fertilize with love and adoration



So it blooms open wide�



And the world can see why you are my bouquet



That pollinates my world with the miracle of



Nature's sweet honey.

Fabuloso!... Espectacular.... Magico... speechless... 100 % Magical it looks like me! lol opps!

[Cherryblossom]

awwwwwwww. I enjoyed readingevery line. I can really feel the emotion here.
A miracle walking this earth.



Escaping the reaches� of death.



Proving once again



Angels aren't just for heaven�

these lines are wonderful, and I feel the same way. Great job!

[closed account]

Good Lord! (with all due respect) this was so romantic!! she must melt with every word you speak for her!!
I loved it!! I am sure she did more!! lol

[J.Black]

wow what a miracle this was and for me to have the chance to read it!

"our skin is the silk sheets



I want tangled up in our legs



As we make love till the break of day� still wanting more



Your heart is a bed or roses



I fertilize with love and adoration



So it blooms open wide�

"

[The DuchessPoet]

You're a miracle...

I needed to read this again...

[Emily B]

I believe your words must be a miracle to her, too. A beacon of hope when the road has been too dark. Wonderful writing.

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I can't write a love poem worth a damn but you are quite the master of love inspired prose which seems to roll off of you like silk.

"And the world can see why you are my bouquet
That pollinates my world with the miracle of
Nature's sweet honey. "

~ A beautiful and most gracious ending to such a wonderful piece. Great job!