This is an interesting and positive write! It shows that eventhough thunder and lightning can be a challenge and in my humble opinion extremely terrifying... one can handle it and keep moving foward!
Making it through the challenge... yet strong enough to keep the soul shining!
Written with the voice of a true cowboy.
I like the fight in this poem.
Of course, the mind can go a little sensual here, but I know this write was less about Viagra and more about sticking firm to a challenge.
Yet beyond just "roping it in" I felt the take home was to enjoy the ride as well. Without that triumphant ride the fight was wasted...
Very wonderfully written. I can see why you have so many fans here.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, glad you liked it... Never realized I even had fans.
I love the thunder, Dale - I always sit at the sofa and watch it when we have it. I just love it, hahaha. I remember when I was young I would sit by the window, with my teddy and sweets, and watch the thunder and lightning. :) Nicely done.
What a fiery and inspirational writing.. this one is really alive and vivid! You can feel the depth of a deep-rooted goal shining through this one.. Keep riding the lighting.. what a great line.. awesome job!
Powerful imagery, with the metaphorical blend of nature and wildness of the west. Gripping tight to what you desire... what you believe in. Lifting write in every way!
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..