Remember...

  

Remember the rain

Quenching our lips

In that life altering kiss.

 

Remember the sun

Lighting up our eyes

When love was on the rise.

 

Remember the wind

Blowing between us

When I left in such a rush.

 

Remember me

Before the earth

Turns me to dust.

Reviews

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"Remember me
Before the earth
Turns me to dust." ~ Such a stunning finality to a splendid & passionate piece. I like how you incorporate the elements in each stanza (rain, sun, wind, earth) and combine them with your imagery giving this poem a slightly celestial yet genuinely amorous quality. Love gained, love lost...'when I left in such a rush' just like the wind. Very nice.

[The DuchessPoet]

What a "wonderful" poem fulled with passionate metaphors! My favorite, "Remember the wind

Blowing between us

When I left in such a rush."

"Remember me

Before the earth

Turns me to dust."


I like this Cowboy and I love your creative presentation as well!

The Duchess,

[Anima Inspired]

Beautifully written... You know, I often ponder over what I will be remembered for when I'm no longer here; who will be thinking of me and how will they be thinking of me. This poem just reminded me of that ponderance, as it shows how sweet of a mark that love can make on the soul... Nicely done!

[Norma J. Jessee]

Remember me
Before the earth
Turns me to dust

Breathtaking. These words will be remembered. This is a remarkablely beautiful poem with words that will remembered.I like Crimsonink like how you incorporate the elements in each stanza, it links everything together for the finally stanza, Very beautiful, another favorite.

[Larissa G.]

I found this incredibly touching.
The font wasn't exactly easy to read, but the poem is sweet. :)

[~Kisses~]

This is a romantic piece... asking the one in your heart to remember you before you turn in to dust.
To hold on to the memories created together...

Heart touching ink! :)

[Emily B]

remember me is a haunting phrase . . . "dust thou art to dust returnest was not spoken of the soul."

[Wildfleour]

A very sad ending there, Dale. :(