A Different Me

A quick write that was dying to get out of me.

  

Sometimes I feel like a stranger

When feeling arise I don’t recognize.

I slip into and alternate abyss

Trying to make sense of this grip.

 

Did I fall down the rabbit hole?

Cause it don’t feel like a fairy tale

When I see… a different me.

Reviews

[Emily B]

I know I came and read and reviewed. I said something about how we all find ourselves falling down that rabbit hole. A clever write.

[Wildfleour]

Cowboy -

Line two - feeling/ feelings
Line three - and/an

Other than those two typos, this was a poem that many, if not all, can relate to. There are times we don't recognize our own selves. It is hard to get perspective on one's own self.

[Norma J. Jessee]

You're not alone with this feeling Dale.
I have felt this way so many times, and you have expressed it so well in this poem.
Great write, my friend.

[poetforlife]

Boy, I know this feeling. Right about now, I'm full up to the neck with it!!! LOL. We are still us even though things pop up sometimes that make us feel like a stranger has taken over our body and mind. Great little read!