You Better Believe

You Better Believe

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Just some lyrics I wrote

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It was a simple run to the quick stop

For some cigarettes and beer

When a man appeared from out of the dark

Looking like he needed handout.

I tried to pretend I didn’t see him

Cause my mood was in a hard place

And somehow he must have seen

Inside my soul when he said.

 

You better believe

No one can do it for you

You better believe

So fate will never kill you

You better believe

Or no one will ever know you

You better believe

Then faith will never fail you

 

Kneeling before the woman I love

With a ring and nervous hand

Asking her to be my beautiful bride

As a tear ran down her face.

She looked me in the eye with pain

And said, “I don’t think I’d be a good wife.”

Not knowing what to do all I could say

Were the words that saved me.

 

You better believe

No one can do it for you

You better believe

So fate will never kill you

You better believe

Or no one will ever know you

You better believe

Then faith will never fail you

 

A few years later on the street

She was looking so happy baby in hand

Greeting me with a warm smile

Telling me I saved her life.

As I walked away I gave thanks

To that angel with a dirty face

For the two lives he graced

With those lines I’ll always remember

 

You better believe

No one can do it for you

You better believe

So fate will never kill you

You better believe

Or no one will ever know you

You better believe

Then faith will never fail you

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Dale, this is absolutely FANTASTIC. I love it. It contains a powerful message. We have to believe not only in ourselves but in God, or we are nothing. believing in ourselves gives us strength and courage and self confidence.

Great rhythm flow and the chorus is powerful.
Love it, Love it, Love it.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Or no one will ever know you

You better believe

Then faith will never fail you





Oh Wow, this is just great ~ I like these Lyrics

They're wonderful and inspirational,and also

make a great Daily affirmation~Fran

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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OMG i love it!! You seriously need to get a tune for this, man! There is such a powerful message in this writing.

Great job!!!

~Phoenix~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful song. I really like how you put faith to work for you with the transient and the future bride. Nice write Dale

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome, Dale, Awesome.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful and well written poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem! Sometimes advice can be given from unexpected things
or people. These words are true. These are great lyrics. We should pay
more graditude to those we wouldn't expect to speak with a wise mind.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I LOVE THIS!! Let's move to Nashville and be writers!! LOL. This was really good. You did a great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh Dale, these are some wonderful lyrics! You outdid yourself with this one. Just so beautifully put and so true too. The words flowed and they filled the page with great inspiration. I loved it!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Sweet...just when I think you have out done yourself you go ahead and do it again. This is perfect!! A stranger that reaches into the darkness and speaks life makes for a great poem. So inspirational.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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