I Can't Stop

  

I can’t stop thinking bout you

Captivated by the strength

You possess… I get weak in the knees

Knowing you can do without me.

 

I can’t stop desiring you

Wanting to fill every womanly need

With explosions… to penetrate that passion

That rivals my intensity.

 

I can’t stop wanting you

Taking on the challenge

Of showing…  love may not be a bed of roses

But together we can have a Garden of Eden.

 

I can’t stop though I should

For I know on your own

Is what your heart needs

 

It’s just I can't stop…

Loving you!!

Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

As I read and felt your words of longing and love I also thought of something else. We have control of every part of our body, some more that others , except for one. We have no control of our hearts. We can't make it love someone nor can we make it stop. We can't lie to it ( the heart knows all ) bargain with it or even bribe it. That's why love is blind as people say. Because it is not our choice but our hearts ,and we have absolutely no say in the matter. We can't stop loving someone until our heart chooses to do so.
Beautifully written, Dale. From the heart. This goes to my favs.

[closed account]

Yes, for not matter what the reasons may be to not continue the journey with love
your heart will never understand that! In my opinion there is no such thing in stopping
love forsome, it will happen if and when it wants to.

[Brianna Brie]

I can't stop desiring you
Wanting to fill every womanly need
With explosions� to penetrate that passion
That rivals my intensity.

Great piece! You rock when you can't stop.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Whoa- gave me goosebumps- To see someone EXCITED about love, well that just does it to me. It really is what it is all about, great job friend!

[Jet Lag]

Beautiful! You are the Romantic Rocking Cowboy. :)

Typos:
Of showing� love my not be a bed of roses MAY?
It's just I cant stop� CAN'T

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

the falling (or starting) to love someone is the easy part - it's the stopping that is hard... damn near causes some people to the brink of insanity...
i think you did a fantastic job on this

[Emily B]

there's something about knowing somebody can do very well without us, that only makes us want them more . . .