The Day I Discovered More Then One Sky

  

WAKE UP

 

                        Reflections of sunlight at dawn

                Cast a rainbow through broken glass

                Presenting a wide array of colored skies.

 

STEP OUT

 

                        A feather gently glides across my face

Giving hope that an angel awaits

With salvation lost to false dignity.

 

WALK ALONG

 

                        Sounds of the brook I always pass

                But never really heard now flows purely

                Through the mind cleansing hollow thoughts.

 

RETURN HOME

 

                        I see everything with more clarity

                Now every closet is free of clutter

                And the walls no longer cracked.

 

REST EASY

 

                        As I lay my head down in sweet serine

                To the notion the every day forward

                Is a new beginning to forever and a day.

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

Wonderfully poetic and positive write!

--- Sounds of the brook I always pass

--- But never really heard now flows purely

--- Through the mind cleansing hollow thoughts.

I love these lines most, they are filled with positiveness and wonderful metaphor, although every stanza is great.

Very image provoking piece.

You did a perfect job here. This is poetry!

[Tomás Ó C..]

Brooks we pass but rarely hear though they make the same sound, is like a freind whose advice is taken for granted....

[cest la vie]

Oh I really like this..
Love the format.. it is almost a spoken word..I can definitely hear this being read with emphasis on your subject words.. Nice, Dale..Very nice indeed!!

[Tracie Skarbo]

wow...what a dose of fresh air can do for the spirit and body...your words inspire me to take a walk upon the beach so I too may refresh my soul...wonderful and inspiring write!!

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is a very positive and uplifting poem.
It has very nice structure.
It kept my attention from the beginning till the end.
I am very tired and my pills are starting to ware off so that says a lot.
Very beautiful and inspiring words.
It's lovely.
It's very beautiful.
Everyday reflections are wonderful.
I was very touched by this piece.
Great flow of words.
Nice rythme.
Lovely writing.
Wonderfully written.
Great job!
^_^

[Wildfleour]

This took forever to upload - sorry I've been slow reading your pieces, but the Cafe is a-dragging!

I like this a lot Cowboy. It is an interesting format and speaks to an evolution of your spirit.

Try removing "And, As, To, Is" and see if you like what happens.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Perfect from beginning to end
A fresh breath of air
Enjoyed this read
Cheers,lea

[Norma J. Jessee]

It is amazing what we discover when we take a break from this hectic world of ours and slow down and look around us.

These are beautiful words of inspiration Dale, and you're right there is a whole other world out there, we just have to slow down to see it. Our life is too short for us not to enjoy the beautiful world that God has given us.

[O!]

It is a poem where ure aware of every moment of the day ure living and then rest to know ure ready to face the next.

Lovely..!

In the title ...it should be 'than' one sky...instead of 'then'

x,
O!

[Emily B]

Beautiful reflections. I think you must really have been brushed by that angel. Hope and serenity abide here in your words. Lovely.