I Believe

Finding the positive

  

The flame in my eye

Becomes a ring of fire

That surrounds my heart

With kind warm emotions

Every time I see her.

It gives me the strength

To ride on for what I believe

And my faith breathes a sigh.

 

The candlelight in her eyes

Flickers with hints of blue

From heartaches of yesterday

Yet I still see a red glow

Of devotion and loyalty

To the one her heart burns for

And now I believe again

That love does exsist.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Every time I see her.

It gives me the strength

To ride on for what I believe

And my faith breathes a sigh.


It's always great to find something postive to have faith to go on

instead of the negative emotions which bring the fears and doubts~

that stifle us in our tracks~Great WritE!! my friend~FranMarie

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

beautiful piece of writing ... glad you are finding the positive :)

[*** Hey Jude***]

Beautifully shared emotions that are very heartfelt and touching! ~ Jude :-)

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow this is sooo beautiful!!

The candlelight in her eyes
Flickers with hints of blue
From heartaches of yesterday
Yet I still see a red glow
Of devotion and loyalty
To the one her heart burns for
And now I believe again
That love does exsist.

I love love love this piece!!!

[Anima Inspired]

Nicely done...I'm glad to see your writing taking this turn. What a beautiful and sentimentally powerful piece...

[T]

Beautifully written sweetie! Never give up my friend ... hugs

[Victoria Lee~]

Never stop believing Dale.. You are such a wonderful writer........Never lose faith....dance on the edge but never lose faith..........This is beautiful!

[Norma J. Jessee]

And now I believe again,
That love does exist.

What a breath-taking tribute to the one who has opened your eyes and heart to the fact that love does exist. I believe that there exists a true match for each and every one of us. I had this quotation on my site for a long time "In dreams and in love there are no impossiblities" and I believe this.

This is a fantastic write, my friend.

[Mysty Rayn]

And now I believe again

That love does exsist.

I couldn't be happier to see these lines from you. Always believe.
Another great write from you.

[SM Davis]

Yes, my friend, love does exist. It's bigger than you, me, everyone. We just have to know what to look for before we truly see it.