Without You

  

Without you these aching arms

Are nothing more then limbs

Nailed to a cross without faith.

 

Without you the light in my eyes

Has become merely candles

In the pouring rain.

 

Without you my dreams have become

Lost in the chilling fog

Clouding my mind.

 

Without you this heart

Is just a life support machine

Waiting to be unplugged.

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Without you these aching arms

Are nothing more then limbs

Nailed to a cross without faith.

I never told you but you have a soul that is so pure!! and you take me to places that i long to be.. like this piece of poetry that it is amazing .. and so powerful you got me!. I will nailed anytime my arms on that cross just for you.. love this poetry.. love it.. Magic

[emmajoy]

Sad, beautiful poem; tragic, finely written...

[Emily B]

Without you, the loss is palpable, you make us feel your heart with these words.

[Angel Bird]

-- Without you my dreams have become

-- Lost in the chilling fog

-- Clouding my mind.

What are moments in a lifetime worth - if there's noone to share them with...

Why do we only know to value what we had - when we lost it...

Heartbreaking and sad, but well penned!