The Devvil made me do it, :)! Seriously, it's an interesting piece and I think we can all relate a bit. There are times when we feel like we have all been down this road before, yet we still don't know what choices we should make. It can all be so very frustrating and confusing and maddening. You are very descriptive in this piece and it makes it easy for me to envision the words as little scenes in my mind. Thanks for the great write.
Never saw this one. Kinda scary and I can see your head was in a bad place. I walked behind Sabastian at a kiss concert. His girlfriend was hot. haha, Good poem Dale and deep.
You do this type of write so well, Dale. The imagery always blows me away. I love that you're featuring things from back before I knew you...gives me a chance to really sink my teeth into your history as a writer. Well done, and thank you for reposting this.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I like to refeature for my newer friends and I,love to revisit my old works to see where I have been.. read moreI like to refeature for my newer friends and I,love to revisit my old works to see where I have been... so glad you like it.
Well written poem. A place I don't want to be...the devil's lair...not for this maiden fair. You're tooo sweet for his den of death
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ahhh why thank you young lady... but the devil comes in many forms and sometimes we do not see it ti.. read moreAhhh why thank you young lady... but the devil comes in many forms and sometimes we do not see it till it is too late.
11 Years Ago
I only know that all too well. But we gotta fight the battle, Cuz' my dad can beat his dad. My dad i.. read moreI only know that all too well. But we gotta fight the battle, Cuz' my dad can beat his dad. My dad is God ;) So is yours
This is a great poem, but I can also feel your sadness here. Your words
wrap around each other, pulling in, a sacrificial testiment of your emotions.
The flow is very good, and they reflect dark, torrid images. AD
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..