Till The Next Time

just a quick rhyme that popped in my head

  

Music plays

Brain relates

Good intentions

Bad relations

On the sand

I surely stand

Need to escape

In new landscape

Time aids

Memories fade…

 

Until the next time

I see your face.

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Seems like that place to escape will be overcrowed with WC writers. Seems to be the theme.

On the sand
I surely stand
Need to escape
In new landscape

If you want to escape sand, it must be a sad day. I vision the sand with the sea a head full of possiblities.

as always an excellent write.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Oh, I like the sweet anticipation in this little drink of water..... haha - nice!

Kath

[Emily B]

Not really living in the meantime, just marking time.

Brevity works so well for this message.

[Angelic Darkness]

I do love some good tunes, and for me the memories don't fade because
old songs take me back to that same time, same place. Good write...AD

[Windy]

Another great write my freind. Well done on the rhyme and flow, it's very "smooth". Few words, alot of meaning and feeling. Wish things like this just "popped" into my head! lol Again great job. ;)

[emmajoy]

Few words, fine metre... great piece of writing.

Escape from that open place - beaches so peacefui, air so fresh, colours and sounds of the sea - until the memories fade? Not sure you know what you want, or, maybe, who you want.

Maybe we all need to escape for a short while, to re-assess... but inevitably - as your last two lines say, you're back exactly where you want to be, with the 'special face'.

Fine writing. Thank you for letting me share it.

[T]

As much as I love music, sometimes I have to turn it off and enjoy the quietness as I reflect on my thoughts ... Music stirs the emotions deep inside of us ... A change of scenery will do you some good. Somewhere peaceful to regroup and recharge your batteries ... Wonderfully written, my friend, very heartfelt ... hugs

[Traces]

Beautiful sweet sentiments. Blessings, Holly

[ape domenigoni]

I feel that way often, the escape part. Very good :)

[Wildfleour]

intensions - intentions

That was a good quickie! ;)