Next Prey-er

   

Time to worship again

Lead your flock to the depths of hell.

Here on your scared ground

Lying eyes and snakeskin bites

Are parts of the everyday service.

 

High upon your altar

Looking down on your flock

Each one suffering the consequences

From worshiping your

Cruel temptress preechings.

 

Using sex as false salvation

And deceit as Hail Marys

Then corroding their spirits

In your fountain of debauchery

Disguised as pure holy water.

 

So lead them deep into temptation

And deliver them straight to hell

While you worship in the name

Of your beast of burden

That you make others pay for.

 

So sacrifice the virgins

And those not so innocent

But with God as my witness

I will not become your next

PREY-ER!!

 

 

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

Wow this is very good I really like this alot you were really stright down to the point and you made in justifyed, You wrote this so farely and true that people suffer from so manything that some times we dont know what to do...God is suposed to be our healer and our father to bring us salvation and peace.We are not suposed to have to take the devils hand that places bad thing on us as we try to live a stong life...We are tested that yet I know through god but he him said we shall not suffer but yet we do..We suffer from to many things proverty emotional pain phycial ,mental and through the illness that the devil places apon us all...right here is what got me
So lead them deep into temptation

And deliver them straight to hell

While you worship in the name

Of your beast of burden

That you make others pay for.



So sacrifice the virgins

And those not so innocent

But with God as my witness

I will not become your next

PREY-ER!!

cause I will not ever fall to the prayer of the devil or the ones who think that sacrifice the virgins is best for our sins its not God is the one who said if you confess on to me then I shall forgive those who telleth me.You again have written a great piece and I could not have put this toghter better then you have I will rate this one on the most high God lets people recieve the best of all rating when you speake the words of the truth..and here you did so perfectly..ty for being the first one to be able to read this God Bless you and I hope that you become the most greatest writer in the world and I truly mean that I hope that you publish your work and I hope I can have the first signed book....Lots of caring Belinda I also wrote another sex story I know its not the time to tell you this but I did if you would read it I am editing it now ....ty

[alternative_be]

When I saw your read request, I noticed the duality in the title.
Sometimes, I do attend mass or church services and I cannot help but noticing a cult like evolution in the way masses are being lead by some priests, acting like gurus and treating parisheners as sheep in a flock.
I loathe this dreadful evolution, for it is my belief whether you are religious or not, everybody is free to make up his/her own mind and should be lead into temptation. (Great use of the 'Our Father)
By writing this, I hope that the readers will be more afterwards what they are getting themselves into the next time they attend mass or any religious service.
I do believe there is a God, but I will not be tempted to join any kind of religious organisation trying to take over my mind.
Thank you for sending this to me!

[Angel Bird]

Strong and powerful write! One senses the palpable angriness in every line.

The reader undoubtedly gets the message.

Very impressive!

[T]

The picture you show and the words make me feel this poem to be about a Woman, a temptress who prays on her collection of worshipers....and in the end you will not become a victim...enjoyed it very much!!!

[The Spaniard]

Excellent work my friend! It seems like flocks of sheep are springing up everywhere. And there always seems to be a shepard to lead them. Sad really, nice job.

[T]

Wow Dale! This awesome poem delivers your strong message! Wonderfully written, cowboy! Loved the ending! hugs

[MistyJRose]

Wow this is definitely a powerful message. I liked the poem a lot. Going to put it in my favorites and i agree with Bright eyes, too many people men and women use sex too much to get ahead in this world!

[Mysty Rayn]

So good. I just don't know what to say. I really loved reading this. That's all.