Next Prey-er

   

Time to worship again

Lead your flock to the depths of hell.

Here on your scared ground

Lying eyes and snakeskin bites

Are parts of the everyday service.

 

High upon your altar

Looking down on your flock

Each one suffering the consequences

From worshiping your

Cruel temptress preechings.

 

Using sex as false salvation

And deceit as Hail Marys

Then corroding their spirits

In your fountain of debauchery

Disguised as pure holy water.

 

So lead them deep into temptation

And deliver them straight to hell

While you worship in the name

Of your beast of burden

That you make others pay for.

 

So sacrifice the virgins

And those not so innocent

But with God as my witness

I will not become your next

PREY-ER!!

 

 

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

Wow this is very good I really like this alot you were really stright down to the point and you made in justifyed, You wrote this so farely and true that people suffer from so manything that some times we dont know what to do...God is suposed to be our healer and our father to bring us salvation and peace.We are not suposed to have to take the devils hand that places bad thing on us as we try to live a stong life...We are tested that yet I know through god but he him said we shall not suffer but yet we do..We suffer from to many things proverty emotional pain phycial ,mental and through the illness that the devil places apon us all...right here is what got me
So lead them deep into temptation

And deliver them straight to hell

While you worship in the name

Of your beast of burden

That you make others pay for.



So sacrifice the virgins

And those not so innocent

But with God as my witness

I will not become your next

PREY-ER!!

cause I will not ever fall to the prayer of the devil or the ones who think that sacrifice the virgins is best for our sins its not God is the one who said if you confess on to me then I shall forgive those who telleth me.You again have written a great piece and I could not have put this toghter better then you have I will rate this one on the most high God lets people recieve the best of all rating when you speake the words of the truth..and here you did so perfectly..ty for being the first one to be able to read this God Bless you and I hope that you become the most greatest writer in the world and I truly mean that I hope that you publish your work and I hope I can have the first signed book....Lots of caring Belinda I also wrote another sex story I know its not the time to tell you this but I did if you would read it I am editing it now ....ty

[Liza]

is it really sex they sell...to draw or repel? i have been thinking about this lately...
Because they want women to procreate and submit...and multiply their herd...i know sex is powerful..in every way...whether we over-use or under-use it...it really does seem to motivate us...
even in nature; every female needs her male; and it doesnt matter if the roosters share one c**k...as long as its the strongest most dominant one...

i love the play on prayer and prey er - that is burning hot!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Outstanding writing. It was quite emotionally charged and sent lightning bolts across the net as I read it. Loved it!

[Muse]

This made me think of one of my favorite books. Anne Rice and her Book Queen of the Damned. In other words...I love this.

But in terms of real life. Some of us worship many in high rankings..that are blood suckers, they take take our money, our prayers, and we get nothing in return. So I see a lot of irony in this poem. Clever penning as always my friend.

Muse

[Tony]

Uh-huh.... the "Get out your wallet and Save your Soul" club.....
Sickening, really.
I am not a christian, as it were, but I love exposing false teachers.....

..fountain of debauchery, disguised as pure holy water.....
Good one.

The author shows the same outrage and disgust that I felt as I read of old women in lonely apartments, who eat dog food so as to be able to tithe sufficiently to greedy madmen in fancy suits who they have erroneously been made to believe will intercede for them in matters of God, and that they are necessary.
My favorite scene is when ol' OralRoberts is leaning over the grave of his recently dead mother, proclaiming that she would want us to give generously so the tent revivals can thrive.
And did they ever.
Creflo Dollar did an hour on credit card management they other morning.
I was incredulous, drugged by his audacity and misrepresentation.
Dr. Dollar! Verguenza!

The proverbial middleman. In researching the programming I found a world of illusion and deceit. Where material gains through emotional manipulation and cruel but highly effective methods of mind control and marketing, was so evil as to clearly be demonic, in the biblical sense.

Good work, Vaquero.
Your poem articulates in a lyric fashion an attitude much more....
well, christian, I guess... than the subject.

[Joanna Maharis]

This is a beautiful portrait of captivity within the tangled web of one who enchants. The imagery throughout this piece is beautiful, and heightens the senses within the mind's eye. Throughout the duration of time I was reading this piece I could envision a vile form of evil summoning the flames to rise higher and higher and entrapping her prisoners within them. An impressive piece of writing.

[Norma M Sutton]

hmmm The day I walk into a church that has snake handling I'll leave. I have enough of those varmits to deal with on a daily baisis, both the belly crawling kind and the two legged ones. Well said.

[Seashell]

This is good. So you will not become the next prey-er. Well you're certainly not a preyer...so then why would you not want to pray instead ? Strong views here on the actual preacher rather than God himself methinks. But as "God as your witness"..haaaaaa !! One could be quite petrified after reading this....but then it's by Cowboy...so all is well...teee heee !!!
Just been to clean the village church......was thinking about this poem as I was dusting the communion table..... woooooo scareeeeeee stuff from Dale boy.
Thanks CB
BBXX

[Desert Dreamer]

I like your poem. We must be careful who we follow and who we worship.

[LadyNaida]

This is straight to the point, no sugar coding, I like it. People need to know the truth and nothing but the truth.

[Through the Gateway]

Such a wonderfully adamant rant, Cowboy. The imagery is fantastic and I can totally feel the distaste as you speak to this person who has become a demi-goddess of lecherous fulfillment.

Excellent work!