Angel With A Dirty Face

Angel With A Dirty Face

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Even the most innocent have secrets

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Nature’s breath rolls in stealth

except the earth’s dust

that can’t be tamed.

Heaven’s tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace.

These forces of nature alone

define divine innocents

but together create

an angel with a dirty face.

Danger lies in being alone

but the devil is a waken

when two make a pair

from lights and mirrors.

The answers to pure wings

is found in the thickest part

of the rolling fog.

So seek and you shall find

what is written in stone

until the new day dawns.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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I have alot to say about this poem yet again another great poem of yours, you have the gift with the mind heart and the hand that writes your poems, This piece stuck out wonderfuly cause of just mainly this part

Heaven's tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace.

These forces of nature alone

define divine innocents

but together create

an angel with a dirty face.

Danger lies in being alone

but the devil is a waken

when two make a pair

from lights and mirrors.

God holds a key for us in life and the Devil trys to make us ugly and hurtful and your passion in this poem alone show your grace and I know from all of your wrting that you have the gift of showing the true side of you and what brings out the inner part of your self and life,TY so much for sharing this with me I love it...Belinda
God Bless

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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this poem rolls with passion and love that flows with time, it is wild and unabled to be tamed, yet tomorrow you will tempt it's fate again. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I still sense such pain.....truly an enormity of it. I like very much your images and metaphors. I find this to be quite succinct and to the point. However, I wonder if you are both writing about your pain and at the same time obscuring it. In some of my poetry I do this. Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a beautiful piece of work... i love the line about Heaven's tears falling...
fantastic piece of writing

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I had to read this several times to gage the meaning and found one for myself...lovely write

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The answers to pure wings
is found in the thickest part
of the rolling fog."

I have to agree that this part is by far the best! I speaks so much of the mysteries of the middlelands, the places inbetween where the spirits and secrets lay.
I loved the poem! It was deep and made the reader reflect on what it may mean to themselves.

I think that it could have ended with the fog. The last part threw it off for me. But that's just me. :)

Thanks for sharing!
Kansas


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written and finely constructed.

You create pictures with phrases, touch on things in a subtle but very clear way :

'Danger lies in being alone / but the devil is a waken / when two make a pair / from lights and mirrors.'

The reader has to dig a little to discover what she/he thinks might be wrapped in the words. Consequently and maybe, we find differences according to how the mind thinks:

'The answers to pure wings / is found in the thickest part / of the rolling fog. / So seek and you shall find
what is written in stone / until the new day dawns.'

Thank you so much for sharing.








Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I have alot to say about this poem yet again another great poem of yours, you have the gift with the mind heart and the hand that writes your poems, This piece stuck out wonderfuly cause of just mainly this part

Heaven's tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace.

These forces of nature alone

define divine innocents

but together create

an angel with a dirty face.

Danger lies in being alone

but the devil is a waken

when two make a pair

from lights and mirrors.

God holds a key for us in life and the Devil trys to make us ugly and hurtful and your passion in this poem alone show your grace and I know from all of your wrting that you have the gift of showing the true side of you and what brings out the inner part of your self and life,TY so much for sharing this with me I love it...Belinda
God Bless

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

this is my new favorite of yours. I loved your composition, dale, this was my favorite part "The answers to pure wings

is found in the thickest part

of the rolling fog." -------- you write metaphysical poetry dear, I hope you also live it. smile great writing! lara



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes we do! Secrets can be fun! This was very interesting indeed...

"Heaven's tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace."

Loved it!
Janice Ann

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting piece, Dale! I think everything has it's secrets, but your metaphors here are awesome...
Good stuff! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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