Angel With A Dirty Face

Even the most innocent have secrets

Nature’s breath rolls in stealth

except the earth’s dust

that can’t be tamed.

Heaven’s tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace.

These forces of nature alone

define divine innocents

but together create

an angel with a dirty face.

Danger lies in being alone

but the devil is a waken

when two make a pair

from lights and mirrors.

The answers to pure wings

is found in the thickest part

of the rolling fog.

So seek and you shall find

what is written in stone

until the new day dawns.

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

I have alot to say about this poem yet again another great poem of yours, you have the gift with the mind heart and the hand that writes your poems, This piece stuck out wonderfuly cause of just mainly this part

Heaven's tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace.

These forces of nature alone

define divine innocents

but together create

an angel with a dirty face.

Danger lies in being alone

but the devil is a waken

when two make a pair

from lights and mirrors.

God holds a key for us in life and the Devil trys to make us ugly and hurtful and your passion in this poem alone show your grace and I know from all of your wrting that you have the gift of showing the true side of you and what brings out the inner part of your self and life,TY so much for sharing this with me I love it...Belinda
God Bless

[Kenneth The Poet]

Beautiful as always, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Seashell]

"seek and ye shall find" indeed.
and yes....even the innocent have secrets...it's allowed !

Love the title....
ohh and the pic is cute too...
Babs xx

[Stef Outsiders]

WoooW I love!...

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Sorry it took me so long to review this. I always love things that have a good/evil vibe to it. Loved this write!

[Ladysue]

This is phenomenal right from the first line...superb imagery with a fantastic flow. Powerful piece that lingers in the readers mind...Beautifully done...

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem flows very smoothly without missing a beat. The imagery is simple outstanding and it invokes different emotions with the different scenes.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

wow, "so shall you seek so shall you find,"
"written in stone" love that, so twilight zone,
----great write, mishel

[MagiCrystal]

Heaven's tears fall

so compassionately down

a porcelain face carved

of beauty and grace. Captivating.. line and lies.. so tell me ?
These lines I think they are out of life or out of line.. A genius.. 100 %

[closed account]

very nice Dale..... this was a different write
for you! you did great!!

[Jazmyne]

Danger lies in being alone
but the devil is a waken
when two make a pair

those words stuck out in this piece. i really did enjoy this one. your work is so amazing. you write from the heart. im glad i read this one!